for Lost and Loved6/16/2015 c11 CallMeBea
That was a long chapter! Jeez girl! Idk the answer to the contest but I was looking for like 10 minutes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
That was a long chapter! Jeez girl! Idk the answer to the contest but I was looking for like 10 minutes. I can't wait for the next chapter!
6/16/2015 c10 CallMeBea
I LOVE THE SONGS! So creative and inspiring! I like Tris's more than Chrissy's though.
I LOVE THE SONGS! So creative and inspiring! I like Tris's more than Chrissy's though.
6/16/2015 c9 CallMeBea
I agree with Uriah and the movie quality. I want to see some fluff in upcoming chapters... please?!
I agree with Uriah and the movie quality. I want to see some fluff in upcoming chapters... please?!
6/16/2015 c8 CallMeBea
Tris went cra cra! My favorite fanfic is also Cigarette Smoke or My Dog's a Death Eater. Btw that review from the last chapter was me.
Tris went cra cra! My favorite fanfic is also Cigarette Smoke or My Dog's a Death Eater. Btw that review from the last chapter was me.
6/16/2015 c7 Guest
Great chapter! Lots of action!
QOTC- I would be a Amity/Candor Diveregnt
Great chapter! Lots of action!
QOTC- I would be a Amity/Candor Diveregnt
6/16/2015 c6 CallMeBea
I love the story Deja vu! I hope she gets out alive! I am sort of scared to read the next chapter.
I love the story Deja vu! I hope she gets out alive! I am sort of scared to read the next chapter.
6/16/2015 c5 CallMeBea
Who is it?! Hahahah to the suckers who had to wait! I get it once I press next!
Who is it?! Hahahah to the suckers who had to wait! I get it once I press next!
6/16/2015 c4 CallMeBea
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ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww URIAH'S DARE! EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
6/16/2015 c3 CallMeBea
I was disappointed when she didn't remember Tobias, but it's too early for that, isn't it?
I was disappointed when she didn't remember Tobias, but it's too early for that, isn't it?
6/16/2015 c2 CallMeBea
I like the idea of the Tobias POV, I just think you should have used a more common song
I like the idea of the Tobias POV, I just think you should have used a more common song
6/16/2015 c1 CallMeBea
Interesting concept, sorry you are going to be getting a lot of updates because I don't like leaving unappreciated stories like this, unnoticed.
Interesting concept, sorry you are going to be getting a lot of updates because I don't like leaving unappreciated stories like this, unnoticed.
4/24/2015 c10 
6Divergent Kitty
Ash, don't stress yourself! :) I have currently been having writer's block(NUUHHHH) but I have been managing my writing and schoolwork so that neither gets in the way of the other.
Anyway, this chapter was great, I love the originally written songs, and the fact that you had Chris and Tris have some girl time. :D
And QOTC, hmm... I'd save... I dunno actually. Probably my phone cuz it has all the memories stored inside. And I would absolutely hate to lose it.
I can't save my rabbit or hamster cuz I don't know how to carry them ;-; Cri
Divergent Kitty
6Divergent KittyAsh, don't stress yourself! :) I have currently been having writer's block(NUUHHHH) but I have been managing my writing and schoolwork so that neither gets in the way of the other.
Anyway, this chapter was great, I love the originally written songs, and the fact that you had Chris and Tris have some girl time. :D
And QOTC, hmm... I'd save... I dunno actually. Probably my phone cuz it has all the memories stored inside. And I would absolutely hate to lose it.
I can't save my rabbit or hamster cuz I don't know how to carry them ;-; Cri
Divergent Kitty