4/20/2015 c10 Swagger
I can't believe you wrote those songs off the top of your head! They were amazing! I can't wait to see what Four says! I would save my kitten, Fluffy(so original right). I love her with all my heart!
I can't believe you wrote those songs off the top of your head! They were amazing! I can't wait to see what Four says! I would save my kitten, Fluffy(so original right). I love her with all my heart!
4/20/2015 c9 Swagger
Hahaha! I love this! I'm rolling around laughing my head off right now!
Hahaha! I love this! I'm rolling around laughing my head off right now!
4/20/2015 c8 Swagger
Did really get it beacause of the doubled chaoter. But the write was great!
Did really get it beacause of the doubled chaoter. But the write was great!
4/20/2015 c7 Swagger
I think you doubled the chapter. Whoops. Hope you can fix it soon cause I would like to read the actually chapter 7.
I think you doubled the chapter. Whoops. Hope you can fix it soon cause I would like to read the actually chapter 7.
4/20/2015 c6 Swagger
Kinda a lot of of grammar mistakes, but you can tell whaa you mean.
Kinda a lot of of grammar mistakes, but you can tell whaa you mean.
4/20/2015 c5 Swagger
Your evil! Evil! Jk, I can't wait to keep reading!
Your evil! Evil! Jk, I can't wait to keep reading!
4/20/2015 c4 Swagger
Ooohhh cliffy! But I get to see what happens without the wait! Hahaah yeah!
Ooohhh cliffy! But I get to see what happens without the wait! Hahaah yeah!
4/20/2015 c3 Swagger
This story isn't utter crap! It's good work and you shouldn't put yourself down like that!
This story isn't utter crap! It's good work and you shouldn't put yourself down like that!
4/20/2015 c2 Swagger
Good, even though the length was mostly made up of the song, it was interesting though.
Good, even though the length was mostly made up of the song, it was interesting though.
4/20/2015 c1 Swagger
Cool I like this story. I'm gonna try to review on every chapter!
Cool I like this story. I'm gonna try to review on every chapter!
4/17/2015 c11 Divergentlover023
Does Tris and Tobias get beCk together? And does tris remember every thing later in the story?
Does Tris and Tobias get beCk together? And does tris remember every thing later in the story?
3/22/2015 c10 2AllegianTobias4610
I have not seen insurgent even though I want to really bad! Yes I think there should be a Tobias POV
I have not seen insurgent even though I want to really bad! Yes I think there should be a Tobias POV
3/15/2015 c9 1FANGIRL
Great story, but is a little fast-paced in my opinion. And I cannot believe that you made Tris forget everyone again. She had just kinda remembered everyone (except Four...poor, poor Four) and now she is totally blank! YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO TRIS. Any who... update soon! ;)
P.S.- on the favorite fan fictions...I can't tell how many fanfics I am reading at once. Every day I go through my rounds to check if any had updated. So I really don't have a favourite.
Great story, but is a little fast-paced in my opinion. And I cannot believe that you made Tris forget everyone again. She had just kinda remembered everyone (except Four...poor, poor Four) and now she is totally blank! YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO TRIS. Any who... update soon! ;)
P.S.- on the favorite fan fictions...I can't tell how many fanfics I am reading at once. Every day I go through my rounds to check if any had updated. So I really don't have a favourite.
3/17/2015 c9 5literallycrazynerd
Hey RebelStiff,
This is an incredible story. I would love to co-write a story with you, please PM me, I really enjoy your style of writing. Please keep updating! Seriously this is good stuff.
3 LCNxx
Hey RebelStiff,
This is an incredible story. I would love to co-write a story with you, please PM me, I really enjoy your style of writing. Please keep updating! Seriously this is good stuff.
3 LCNxx