for Lost and Loved3/11/2015 c9 TMIfandom
Wow! That was depressing.
Wow! That was depressing.
3/10/2015 c9 
6Divergent Kitty
YAY PRINCESS FLUFFYBUTT :DDD
Holy shit I just imagined Theo James as a gaddamned leprechaun LMAO XDDD
Enjoyable chapter, MOOREEE. c:
Divergent Kitty
6Divergent KittyYAY PRINCESS FLUFFYBUTT :DDD
Holy shit I just imagined Theo James as a gaddamned leprechaun LMAO XDDD
Enjoyable chapter, MOOREEE. c:
Divergent Kitty
3/8/2015 c9 2AllegianTobias4610
AOTC: One of my favorite fanfiction is More Today Than Yesterday.
Idea:
Maybe you could have Four go so depressed he has to kiss Tris one last time. But that helps Tris gained her memories slowly. The only problem is for some reason she can remember seeing outside the fence in her coma. Was what she remember true, should she tell someone or should she keep quiet and figure it out all by herself?
P.S. What she saw in her coma was David and the GP.
2AllegianTobias4610AOTC: One of my favorite fanfiction is More Today Than Yesterday.
Idea:
Maybe you could have Four go so depressed he has to kiss Tris one last time. But that helps Tris gained her memories slowly. The only problem is for some reason she can remember seeing outside the fence in her coma. Was what she remember true, should she tell someone or should she keep quiet and figure it out all by herself?
P.S. What she saw in her coma was David and the GP.
2/21/2015 c8 Guest
AWW! YOU TURNED BOTH OF THEM INTO TRAITORS! WHY?!
AWW! YOU TURNED BOTH OF THEM INTO TRAITORS! WHY?!
2/22/2015 c8 2sologirl18
I think u should show the escape from Erudite and I think I would be a candor,Dauntless, Erudite Divergent! ;) I tell people things I dont mean to say way to much an I consider myself pretty brave and smart! :) :) BTW great chapt I loved EVERY LITTLE FREAKING BIT OF IT! Keep posting!
2sologirl18I think u should show the escape from Erudite and I think I would be a candor,Dauntless, Erudite Divergent! ;) I tell people things I dont mean to say way to much an I consider myself pretty brave and smart! :) :) BTW great chapt I loved EVERY LITTLE FREAKING BIT OF IT! Keep posting!
2/21/2015 c8 foreveramused
Fantastic chapter! I think I would be amity and erudite, I'm not really brave. Hmm, like dovergent Kitty said, Escaping from Erudite would be more action filled, so I choose that one :D Update soon?
Fantastic chapter! I think I would be amity and erudite, I'm not really brave. Hmm, like dovergent Kitty said, Escaping from Erudite would be more action filled, so I choose that one :D Update soon?
2/21/2015 c8 2AllegianTobias4610
I think I would fit into Dauntless and Abnegation.
Escape from Erudite
2AllegianTobias4610I think I would fit into Dauntless and Abnegation.
Escape from Erudite
2/21/2015 c8 6Divergent Kitty
I'll be Dauntless and Amity, for sure. Maybe a bit of Abnegation mixed in there, too.
And I recommend having them escape from Erudite, going straight to Dauntless would be a bit boring, add more action! :D Although if you have no time it's okay you can go with going straight to Dauntless.
And YEEAAAHHHH SHE KICKED THE BACKSTABBIN' BRO IN DA BAWLS YEEAAAHHHH XDDD
Divergent Kitty
6Divergent KittyI'll be Dauntless and Amity, for sure. Maybe a bit of Abnegation mixed in there, too.
And I recommend having them escape from Erudite, going straight to Dauntless would be a bit boring, add more action! :D Although if you have no time it's okay you can go with going straight to Dauntless.
And YEEAAAHHHH SHE KICKED THE BACKSTABBIN' BRO IN DA BAWLS YEEAAAHHHH XDDD
Divergent Kitty
2/19/2015 c7 2sologirl18
That was an amazing chapter! OMG keep going with it! Idc about the cliffys! That's how good this fanfic is! Luv it!
2sologirl18That was an amazing chapter! OMG keep going with it! Idc about the cliffys! That's how good this fanfic is! Luv it!
2/13/2015 c7 Guest
That was a great chapter update soon! I loved how Tobias wasn't really Tobias and Tris knew him we'll enough to figure that out!;)
That was a great chapter update soon! I loved how Tobias wasn't really Tobias and Tris knew him we'll enough to figure that out!;)
2/10/2015 c7 6Divergent Kitty
Omigosh you used my idea? I AM SO HONOURED RIGHT NOW YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW! XDDD
And I really love Zeke's thoughts like that is so Zeke! And Uriah too. Thanks for the shoutout as well! :DDD
And ooh, jumping into the action already? You make me look bad I'm not even at the main part of my plot! :((((
Just kidding! And progress report: I am in the middle of writing the beginning of the ACTION STUFFZ! *dun dun DUUNNN*
Keep writing! :D
Divergent Kitty
6Divergent KittyOmigosh you used my idea? I AM SO HONOURED RIGHT NOW YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW! XDDD
And I really love Zeke's thoughts like that is so Zeke! And Uriah too. Thanks for the shoutout as well! :DDD
And ooh, jumping into the action already? You make me look bad I'm not even at the main part of my plot! :((((
Just kidding! And progress report: I am in the middle of writing the beginning of the ACTION STUFFZ! *dun dun DUUNNN*
Keep writing! :D
Divergent Kitty