for Scions of Rao:11/4/2019 c3 Guest
More grammar errors. WHERE'S THE REST OF STORY ? ? ? Just when it was finally getting to be really, really interesting-pffft-it's over.
More grammar errors. WHERE'S THE REST OF STORY ? ? ? Just when it was finally getting to be really, really interesting-pffft-it's over.
11/4/2019 c2 Guest
50,000 x light speed? You have at least one misspelling and a number of grammar errors. I don't usually comment on the actual story unless it's bad. I think it might have been funny if Athena was somehow affected by the love potion as she comes off as a stuck-up and holier-than-thou professional virgin.
50,000 x light speed? You have at least one misspelling and a number of grammar errors. I don't usually comment on the actual story unless it's bad. I think it might have been funny if Athena was somehow affected by the love potion as she comes off as a stuck-up and holier-than-thou professional virgin.
11/4/2019 c1 Guest
You have numerous grammar errors. I don't remember whether or not you have any spelling problems. Personally, I think that Cassie "Wonder Girl" Sandsmark (did I get that right?) is a more appropriate match for Conner. What happened to Donna Troy? She's been retconned so damn many times that I don't know who or what she is any more. Speaking of DC making incredibly stupid decisions, in late October 2019 I learned that DC is going to eliminate "Clark Kent" by revealing him as Superman...at least as far as Earth-1 is concerned. It sounds as if it is another money-grubbing idea to me. When this idea tanks I hope that the guy is out of a job real fast (he came over from Marvel, but then so did Jack Kirby who created the New Gods). Up until now Marvel has done extremely well in the movies but less well on broadcast tv whereas DC has done extremely on regular tv but is struggling in movies (except for the Dark Knight trilogy).
You have numerous grammar errors. I don't remember whether or not you have any spelling problems. Personally, I think that Cassie "Wonder Girl" Sandsmark (did I get that right?) is a more appropriate match for Conner. What happened to Donna Troy? She's been retconned so damn many times that I don't know who or what she is any more. Speaking of DC making incredibly stupid decisions, in late October 2019 I learned that DC is going to eliminate "Clark Kent" by revealing him as Superman...at least as far as Earth-1 is concerned. It sounds as if it is another money-grubbing idea to me. When this idea tanks I hope that the guy is out of a job real fast (he came over from Marvel, but then so did Jack Kirby who created the New Gods). Up until now Marvel has done extremely well in the movies but less well on broadcast tv whereas DC has done extremely on regular tv but is struggling in movies (except for the Dark Knight trilogy).
12/27/2018 c3 GodKal10
Great rewrite of sons of rao”, please UPDATE SOON.
I think after Conner is released from the destroyer he should reconsider his decision and realise it's a mistake to get back together with Megan (someone who manipulated him) and break up with her. Afterwards he should look into seeing other people such as wonder girl (who is perfect for him).
Great rewrite of sons of rao”, please UPDATE SOON.
I think after Conner is released from the destroyer he should reconsider his decision and realise it's a mistake to get back together with Megan (someone who manipulated him) and break up with her. Afterwards he should look into seeing other people such as wonder girl (who is perfect for him).
11/10/2018 c3 DianaKal fan
Shane! Come back! Shane!" I'm a 50 yr comic fan. I didn't know about fan fiction at this level until several months ago. So many unfinished stories! This is among those that have held my interest and need a proper "the end!" If necessary, someone else needs to shoulder the burden as in "Conan." Tarzan, Horseclans & Warlock's Heirs are all in Limbo. DC is foolishly hanging on to Lois-Clark (Why?). Good Diana-Kal fanfic is crucial to preserving the dream. Come back or at least challenge people to become your writing partner/s!
Shane! Come back! Shane!" I'm a 50 yr comic fan. I didn't know about fan fiction at this level until several months ago. So many unfinished stories! This is among those that have held my interest and need a proper "the end!" If necessary, someone else needs to shoulder the burden as in "Conan." Tarzan, Horseclans & Warlock's Heirs are all in Limbo. DC is foolishly hanging on to Lois-Clark (Why?). Good Diana-Kal fanfic is crucial to preserving the dream. Come back or at least challenge people to become your writing partner/s!
4/18/2018 c3 mdhunter111
Awesome! Great job with this fanfic! I’m so hyped! Really looking forward to the next chapter, and have a great week! :)
Awesome! Great job with this fanfic! I’m so hyped! Really looking forward to the next chapter, and have a great week! :)
1/21/2018 c3 superboy
Pls continue u are an awesome writer u can't stop cause u are on fire OMG u are talented
Pls continue u are an awesome writer u can't stop cause u are on fire OMG u are talented
5/2/2017 c1 Guest
Cool story please update want to know how it goes
Cool story please update want to know how it goes
4/28/2017 c1 Guest
Dude update it over a year
Dude update it over a year
3/5/2017 c1 Guest
Nice story. I hope you continue working with this story. I can see Superman & Wonder Woman getting legendary weapons of the gods to defeat one of the Primordials. Probably ascending into their godlike forms and gaining godlike abilities.
Nice story. I hope you continue working with this story. I can see Superman & Wonder Woman getting legendary weapons of the gods to defeat one of the Primordials. Probably ascending into their godlike forms and gaining godlike abilities.
8/17/2016 c1 Guest
Hey it's a cool story please update I like to read more
Hey it's a cool story please update I like to read more
5/18/2016 c1 Nagraj
I hope you update your story and not leave it because DC treating poorly of our favourite power couple
I hope you update your story and not leave it because DC treating poorly of our favourite power couple
3/3/2016 c3 
8ULTIMATE POWER COUPLE
Hai man its awesome you should do superboy/wonder girl instead of mm
8ULTIMATE POWER COUPLEHai man its awesome you should do superboy/wonder girl instead of mm