for Ikanaide1/25/2015 c1 Guest
Ahh so sad but it was so cute ;3; Good job
Ahh so sad but it was so cute ;3; Good job
1/25/2015 c1 SmilingPrince
Wow...this was wow... im speechless this was really good. It brought back memories when i watch my first love leave me, me goin to the local university and her going to five states away from me for her college
Wow...this was wow... im speechless this was really good. It brought back memories when i watch my first love leave me, me goin to the local university and her going to five states away from me for her college
1/25/2015 c1 graysgirlfriend
Poor Gray! I hope Lucy comes back!
Poor Gray! I hope Lucy comes back!
1/25/2015 c1 Guest
This was so good!
This was so good!
1/25/2015 c1 
1NicoNicoFan
Wow a NND fan! Mafumafu's cover really is addicting
Cute story overall and not a lot of mistakes. This was great!
1NicoNicoFanWow a NND fan! Mafumafu's cover really is addicting
Cute story overall and not a lot of mistakes. This was great!