
7/4/2015 c8
15mysteryreader6626
Hm. Not bad. The story is interesting and has my gears in my head turning with possibilities, for example Namine is in the school, or Axel knew Foxie in the past, or if he might have a crush on her right now since he was staring at her. You know, those stuff. I can't wait, so good luck! The only thing that bothers me is that I think this story could have more details, and the capitalization. If you fix that, I will be happy. Update soon!

Hm. Not bad. The story is interesting and has my gears in my head turning with possibilities, for example Namine is in the school, or Axel knew Foxie in the past, or if he might have a crush on her right now since he was staring at her. You know, those stuff. I can't wait, so good luck! The only thing that bothers me is that I think this story could have more details, and the capitalization. If you fix that, I will be happy. Update soon!
3/3/2015 c6 SkRiln
Great story so far. Still a little early to determine if it'll be a great on but its holding my interest so you are definitely doing something right.
Great story so far. Still a little early to determine if it'll be a great on but its holding my interest so you are definitely doing something right.
2/16/2015 c4
4Jikookluver16
I like it. The story is cute and i like how you made the characters. Keep it up! I cant wait for the next chapter!

I like it. The story is cute and i like how you made the characters. Keep it up! I cant wait for the next chapter!