
11/3/2015 c3
5Naru934chan
So weird :3 but steak is surely far more important. Meat is everything good in life

So weird :3 but steak is surely far more important. Meat is everything good in life
1/26/2015 c1 Naru934chan
This may be short...but it is somehow completely hilarious! Please continue XD
This may be short...but it is somehow completely hilarious! Please continue XD
1/26/2015 c1
5Poppy Grave Dreams
Woah, this is very interesting, I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Woah, this is very interesting, I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
1/26/2015 c1 Chaon
Haha, short sweet and so much potential.
And it would explain so much about Naruto's screwy abilities. Being able to outrun chunin, jonin and ANBU for hours after his pranks yet in the academy he is dead last and can't concentrate/study or seem to keep what he has learnt.
But Genjutsu is overlaying a chakra illusion on someone's mind and can be removed by disturbing their chakra. But with the fox continuously dumping it's chakra into his system, wouldn't that disturb any genjutsu laid on him within moments of it being placed?
But all in all a nice start and can't wait for more. Hopefully longer.
Haha, short sweet and so much potential.
And it would explain so much about Naruto's screwy abilities. Being able to outrun chunin, jonin and ANBU for hours after his pranks yet in the academy he is dead last and can't concentrate/study or seem to keep what he has learnt.
But Genjutsu is overlaying a chakra illusion on someone's mind and can be removed by disturbing their chakra. But with the fox continuously dumping it's chakra into his system, wouldn't that disturb any genjutsu laid on him within moments of it being placed?
But all in all a nice start and can't wait for more. Hopefully longer.
1/26/2015 c1 Jashl Xxify
For 200 words this is pretty good, hope for longer chapters and more mystery.
For 200 words this is pretty good, hope for longer chapters and more mystery.