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8/4/2017 c1 Total Recall
Yes! Finally someone pressing this subject. When Sarah mentioned her sister leaving a long time ago, I often wondered why Neal didn't use the FBI resources, or even his own underground ones to find her. Thank-you for this. Your grammar is nice, your descriptions are spectacular, and your grasp of the characters are splendid. The scene specifically with Sara's feelings on seeing her sister, are wonderful; how it seems the world had stopped for her, and the overall writing of her shock is great, I loved it.

One thing that confused me was that Sara clearly tells Neal that her parents are deceased back in Season 2 and you mention her mother still being alive (but seeing as this is an AU, I don't mind). That's just me nit-picking though.

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