for A Chance Encounter11/17 c6 Critical2023
sorry but, the lousy sentence structure, the missing information, they weren't listening to him anymore except for Molly and Percival, WHO weren't they Not Listening To?. sorry but do everyone a favor and REDO&Repost the story once you have corrected, or a beta has corrected all the misused words, fixing who is thinking/speaking, filling in the missing sentences, ie, nobody was listening to "Dumbledore" any except for, Story does seem to be interesting and possibly enjoyable but not as it is currently posted
sorry but, the lousy sentence structure, the missing information, they weren't listening to him anymore except for Molly and Percival, WHO weren't they Not Listening To?. sorry but do everyone a favor and REDO&Repost the story once you have corrected, or a beta has corrected all the misused words, fixing who is thinking/speaking, filling in the missing sentences, ie, nobody was listening to "Dumbledore" any except for, Story does seem to be interesting and possibly enjoyable but not as it is currently posted
11/8 c16 Tarec
Just FYI, the names 'Britain' and 'England' are not synomynous - it would be like using 'America' and 'California' interchangeably. Sure, Californians wouldn't mind in the least, but try doing it in a bar in Alabama during or after Happy Hour, especially when a sporting event involving a home team is in progress, and you'll see some pretty spectacular end results. ;)
Britain - or, to use the full-length name, 'the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland' - consists of four nations, plus a smattering of overseas dependencies. The four nations are:
1] England - the biggest, both in terms of population and economy
2] Scotland - the next biggest in both respects, and the location of Hogwarts
3] Wales
4] Northern Ireland
You might find it helpful to think of Britain's four nations as being analogous to America's fifty states. ...or maybe not, I dunno. ;)
Britain's overseas dependencies [broadly analogous to America's ownership of Puerto Rico] include the Isle of Man, Gibraltar, the Channel Islands, the Falkland Islands, Ascension Island, and various Caribbean territories.
I hope this information helps! :)
Just FYI, the names 'Britain' and 'England' are not synomynous - it would be like using 'America' and 'California' interchangeably. Sure, Californians wouldn't mind in the least, but try doing it in a bar in Alabama during or after Happy Hour, especially when a sporting event involving a home team is in progress, and you'll see some pretty spectacular end results. ;)
Britain - or, to use the full-length name, 'the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland' - consists of four nations, plus a smattering of overseas dependencies. The four nations are:
1] England - the biggest, both in terms of population and economy
2] Scotland - the next biggest in both respects, and the location of Hogwarts
3] Wales
4] Northern Ireland
You might find it helpful to think of Britain's four nations as being analogous to America's fifty states. ...or maybe not, I dunno. ;)
Britain's overseas dependencies [broadly analogous to America's ownership of Puerto Rico] include the Isle of Man, Gibraltar, the Channel Islands, the Falkland Islands, Ascension Island, and various Caribbean territories.
I hope this information helps! :)
11/8 c10 Tarec
This chapter is a lot of fun - thank you so much for this! :)
Something to consider if you do another Harry-Fleur story in the future... what if Harry's new wand contains a hair gifted to Harry from Fleur? ...or even a hair each from Fleur and Tonks, if you 'ship the three of them together? Perhaps even a hair each from Fleur, Tonks, and Harry himself? [After all, as someone who survived the unsurvivable Killing Curse, Harry must count as very magically significant / powerful / both.]
This chapter is a lot of fun - thank you so much for this! :)
Something to consider if you do another Harry-Fleur story in the future... what if Harry's new wand contains a hair gifted to Harry from Fleur? ...or even a hair each from Fleur and Tonks, if you 'ship the three of them together? Perhaps even a hair each from Fleur, Tonks, and Harry himself? [After all, as someone who survived the unsurvivable Killing Curse, Harry must count as very magically significant / powerful / both.]
4011/4 c18 Concolor44
Okay, that omake made me laugh. And he's absolutely right.
I really am enjoying your variety of Tasks. So creative!
Okay, that omake made me laugh. And he's absolutely right.
I really am enjoying your variety of Tasks. So creative!
10/21 c17 Argonaut986
Bumbledork is unaware that Crouch junior is in disguise via polyjuce potion, if that’s the case in this story.
Bumbledork is unaware that Crouch junior is in disguise via polyjuce potion, if that’s the case in this story.
10/21 c16 Argonaut986
Bumbledork should be locked up for the rest of his life, in not executed for his plotting.
Bumbledork should be locked up for the rest of his life, in not executed for his plotting.