4/8/2015 c5 64Mycroft-mione
Cool! (I'm the person you know who was looking for your account, btw.) I like that Hazel is angry that she was safe and Gus wasn't, it's very realistic. I think the doctor would've explained how the tumor had disappeared, but also I like that later she relapses. Nice look into Hazel's mind, overall! I'm sad that you're ending this one, but I can't wait for your Divergent fic.
Cool! (I'm the person you know who was looking for your account, btw.) I like that Hazel is angry that she was safe and Gus wasn't, it's very realistic. I think the doctor would've explained how the tumor had disappeared, but also I like that later she relapses. Nice look into Hazel's mind, overall! I'm sad that you're ending this one, but I can't wait for your Divergent fic.
3/29/2015 c1 Guest
I will try to write another Diverent Fanfic soon! :-)
I will try to write another Diverent Fanfic soon! :-)
3/23/2015 c5 GoddessOfFanfic
Why did you stop writing this one and take down your other fanfic? I loved this fanfic and I was interested in your other one for Divergent which you took down with no warning or notification? Why? I hope you post some kind of fanfiction soon because I enjoy reading your writing!
Why did you stop writing this one and take down your other fanfic? I loved this fanfic and I was interested in your other one for Divergent which you took down with no warning or notification? Why? I hope you post some kind of fanfiction soon because I enjoy reading your writing!
3/20/2015 c5 fangirl
I don't speak English but Im learning it in school so Im sorry if there will be mistakes...
I really liked your FanFic! Although it didn't sound very realistic (I mean, I really want that Hazel's cancer will be gone, but I know that here case was too severe) It really sounds like Hazel... If I wouldn't know that this is a FanFic I would really believe that this is a part of the book.
This is amazing don't listen to anybody who tells you it's not.
sorry if I made mistakes :-)
I don't speak English but Im learning it in school so Im sorry if there will be mistakes...
I really liked your FanFic! Although it didn't sound very realistic (I mean, I really want that Hazel's cancer will be gone, but I know that here case was too severe) It really sounds like Hazel... If I wouldn't know that this is a FanFic I would really believe that this is a part of the book.
This is amazing don't listen to anybody who tells you it's not.
sorry if I made mistakes :-)
2/19/2015 c3 sologirl18
Idk why there r so many j's into freaking authors note btw it is supposed to b btw not jbtw idk why!
Idk why there r so many j's into freaking authors note btw it is supposed to b btw not jbtw idk why!
2/1/2015 c2 Swagger
Not very practical. Seriously, you can't just make a tumor disappear.
Not very practical. Seriously, you can't just make a tumor disappear.
2/1/2015 c1 TheDivergentGame
Wow! This is a really good fanfi ! Good job! I hope you can update soon!
Wow! This is a really good fanfi ! Good job! I hope you can update soon!
1/29/2015 c1 2sologirl18
I will try to write a longer chapter next but with mmidterms ad stuff it's just really hard. I will try to upload another over weekend
I will try to write a longer chapter next but with mmidterms ad stuff it's just really hard. I will try to upload another over weekend
1/28/2015 c1 2MentalityWriter13
Aaawww so sad! I'm going to give you a shout out on my fanfiction story because I have some reviews who are really nice and supportive towards new writers. The last totally sounds like something you would say!
Aaawww so sad! I'm going to give you a shout out on my fanfiction story because I have some reviews who are really nice and supportive towards new writers. The last totally sounds like something you would say!