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6/2/2015 c1 weilder of the purified shadow
Dude… get a freaking beta reader, get a grammar expert, heck on second thought just go back to school and re-take writting class; cause there are so manny errors, grammatic, spelling, and plot structure, that it took me 9 hours for my ocd to actually pick out what is happening…

TO ANYONE WHO READS THIS FIND THIS GUY A BETA HE NEEDS ALL THE HELP HE CAN GET,

… but from what (oh so very little) i could get, the plot seems, ok…-ish.

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