Reviews: If Maes Hughes had meet Shou Tucker

6/28/2018 c1

4JazzQueen
One of the best fathers in this series confronts the coldest. It almost feels like they were deliberate parallels. It's great he realized if he let himself go, then he would have become like that monster. And that's the difference between those two men, one had no love in his heart while the other has enough to fill a sea.

1/31/2015 c1

9Fwoosheye
Good story, I like how you captured Hughes. Try to split up the text into smaller paragraphs though, it's a bit hard to read right now. Try to at least use a new row every time you swap between who's talking :)