for Habit2/18/2016 c1 Guest
Oh my gods this is so good, please make more chapters
Oh my gods this is so good, please make more chapters
2/12/2016 c1 DaughterofHermes
Let it freaking be Percy pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssseeeeeeee!
Let it freaking be Percy pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssseeeeeeee!
5/3/2015 c1 amelia
more! do you think you can follow up?
more! do you think you can follow up?
3/17/2015 c1 
28Ikneesias
In any case you are wondering, L-mouss here, :D.
I'm going to rambling all stupid things here, so hope you prepared.
Uhuk-uhuk, Harem Nico, XD. #melukLeo... #salahorang.
Ceritanya aku maraton The Heroes of Olympus (awalnya cuman satu buku yang bisa dibaca, lalu aku mengungkap beauty of donlod from 4shared) dari buku satu sampai buku lima (dari tanggal 23 desember sampai 27), dan langsung jatuh hati ama karakter-karakter ini. Terlebih Leoooo... Lalu aku baca buku ke empat (House of hades tuh dan aku masih nggak ngeh kalau ini buku yang pernah aku nggak sengaja baca spoiler fic dari kakak (jadi dia masih terkejut) dan begitu nyampe di 'Crush' Nico baru sadar kalau ini house of hades yang itu, XD, #diaaneh) dan langsung respect ama Nico karena aku tahu rasanya kayak gimana. Jadi baca ini nih rasanya senyum-senyum gitu, XD. NICO! #ngakak.
Sejujurnya yang paling ngambil perhatianku itu Leo karena dia ngingatin soal aku banget. Tapi jadi suka Nico karena ohmmmgeee aku tahu sakitnya gimana, (juga punya crush untuk bestfriend (masih normal sih) dan nggak berani ngungkapin, lalu eros gila itu nyuruh ngakuin,,, rasanya bikin meledak). Trus hubungannya dengan Will itu, sesuatu, XD.
Sorry i am rambling non-sense here, #orz. Ah, time to go. Bye!
28IkneesiasIn any case you are wondering, L-mouss here, :D.
I'm going to rambling all stupid things here, so hope you prepared.
Uhuk-uhuk, Harem Nico, XD. #melukLeo... #salahorang.
Ceritanya aku maraton The Heroes of Olympus (awalnya cuman satu buku yang bisa dibaca, lalu aku mengungkap beauty of donlod from 4shared) dari buku satu sampai buku lima (dari tanggal 23 desember sampai 27), dan langsung jatuh hati ama karakter-karakter ini. Terlebih Leoooo... Lalu aku baca buku ke empat (House of hades tuh dan aku masih nggak ngeh kalau ini buku yang pernah aku nggak sengaja baca spoiler fic dari kakak (jadi dia masih terkejut) dan begitu nyampe di 'Crush' Nico baru sadar kalau ini house of hades yang itu, XD, #diaaneh) dan langsung respect ama Nico karena aku tahu rasanya kayak gimana. Jadi baca ini nih rasanya senyum-senyum gitu, XD. NICO! #ngakak.
Sejujurnya yang paling ngambil perhatianku itu Leo karena dia ngingatin soal aku banget. Tapi jadi suka Nico karena ohmmmgeee aku tahu sakitnya gimana, (juga punya crush untuk bestfriend (masih normal sih) dan nggak berani ngungkapin, lalu eros gila itu nyuruh ngakuin,,, rasanya bikin meledak). Trus hubungannya dengan Will itu, sesuatu, XD.
Sorry i am rambling non-sense here, #orz. Ah, time to go. Bye!
2/16/2015 c1 Guest
Me no like implacations...implacations bad
( I can not spell :P )
Me no like implacations...implacations bad
( I can not spell :P )
2/6/2015 c1 tebas
Jasico sequel
please?
pretty please?
Jasico sequel
please?
pretty please?
1/31/2015 c1 Hiiiiiiii
You should either continue this or make a sequel. The concept is very good! I feel you just need to play around with your style of writing a little bit (word choice, sentence fluency, third person narrative, first person narrative, etc.) Aside from that, this is great! And just for reference, I'm hoping that it's Jason who wins his heart. Oh! And just two more suggestions: The breaking the fourth wall at the end was a little awkward sounding so maybe not do that? And if you do continue or make a sequel you could play around with Nico's Italian side hm? (Wink, wink)
You should either continue this or make a sequel. The concept is very good! I feel you just need to play around with your style of writing a little bit (word choice, sentence fluency, third person narrative, first person narrative, etc.) Aside from that, this is great! And just for reference, I'm hoping that it's Jason who wins his heart. Oh! And just two more suggestions: The breaking the fourth wall at the end was a little awkward sounding so maybe not do that? And if you do continue or make a sequel you could play around with Nico's Italian side hm? (Wink, wink)
1/31/2015 c1 cas winchester
sequel
sequel
sequel
sequel
sequel
sequel
1/30/2015 c1 Guest
Will of course
Will of course