1/31/2015 c2 mrsbelikov101
Omgod I love this! Keep going please?!
Omgod I love this! Keep going please?!
1/31/2015 c2 6Asherah Isa
That was fun... Well how about dimitri and rose start the training again since she doesn't remember...
N den you can make big deal out of how she is anxious about how she went in coma. For example: dreams about her kidnapping and watevr you can come up which cab cause anxiety
That's all i can come up with ... I let you know if i can get anything else...
Update soon...
Love-Isa..!
That was fun... Well how about dimitri and rose start the training again since she doesn't remember...
N den you can make big deal out of how she is anxious about how she went in coma. For example: dreams about her kidnapping and watevr you can come up which cab cause anxiety
That's all i can come up with ... I let you know if i can get anything else...
Update soon...
Love-Isa..!
1/31/2015 c2 Cathy
Please love it so much update more soon
Please love it so much update more soon
1/31/2015 c2 23Dimitri's.Smexi.Shewolf
So sweet! And I love that the bond is still there.
Great stuff! :D
So sweet! And I love that the bond is still there.
Great stuff! :D
1/31/2015 c2 1hpmalfoypotter
OMG, THIS CHAPTER IS SOOOOOOOOO AMAZING! I LOVE THIS STORY! Maybe at rose will start to regain memories slowly but surely, meanwhile she and dimitri grow closer and he tells her stuff about herself... Just a couple of idea's but i know that whatever you decide to do will be amazing based off what you have already written... Good luck!
OMG, THIS CHAPTER IS SOOOOOOOOO AMAZING! I LOVE THIS STORY! Maybe at rose will start to regain memories slowly but surely, meanwhile she and dimitri grow closer and he tells her stuff about herself... Just a couple of idea's but i know that whatever you decide to do will be amazing based off what you have already written... Good luck!
1/31/2015 c2 1Goodbye.Until.Tomorrow
This is AWESOME so far! Please continue it!
As far as ideas go, I'm not really sure. I do think that Rose would be very hesitant to restart her relationship with Dimitri, considering she doesn't remember/know him, so maybe make that the conflict? (I have this one scene I'm imagining where there's a Strigoi attack and Rose's instincts kick in and she's still totally badass and I don't really know what happens after that. It probably seems more epic in my head. :) My one concern is that since Rose was in a coma for two years, she would probably have muscle atrophy so maybe Dimitri has to train her again? I wouldn't mind some of those scenes! If you want to send me a PM I'd be happy to help with anything!
This is AWESOME so far! Please continue it!
As far as ideas go, I'm not really sure. I do think that Rose would be very hesitant to restart her relationship with Dimitri, considering she doesn't remember/know him, so maybe make that the conflict? (I have this one scene I'm imagining where there's a Strigoi attack and Rose's instincts kick in and she's still totally badass and I don't really know what happens after that. It probably seems more epic in my head. :) My one concern is that since Rose was in a coma for two years, she would probably have muscle atrophy so maybe Dimitri has to train her again? I wouldn't mind some of those scenes! If you want to send me a PM I'd be happy to help with anything!
1/31/2015 c2 vkolova
One-on-one with Dimitri?
One-on-one with Dimitri?
1/31/2015 c2 1VAGypsy
Awwwwwww how cute! Glad that Rose still has her sass intact! So sweet but a little mean how she plays around by questioning Dimitri.
Again, it was beautiful the way he described the love of his life and it would have been heart warming for Rose to hear what he thinks of her.
Great chapter. Hopefully after a few days Rose can be released and start walking the grounds of court. Will Dimitri spend time making Rose fall in love again or will Adrian step in to make a play for her feelings?!
Update again soon!
Awwwwwww how cute! Glad that Rose still has her sass intact! So sweet but a little mean how she plays around by questioning Dimitri.
Again, it was beautiful the way he described the love of his life and it would have been heart warming for Rose to hear what he thinks of her.
Great chapter. Hopefully after a few days Rose can be released and start walking the grounds of court. Will Dimitri spend time making Rose fall in love again or will Adrian step in to make a play for her feelings?!
Update again soon!
1/31/2015 c2 2yunacarman
OMG, the way of Dimitri to described how them met and fall in love is really touching
OMG, the way of Dimitri to described how them met and fall in love is really touching
1/31/2015 c1 1katkitty05
Wow for 2 years she was in coma and doesn't remember anything. ... poor her
Good introduction to the story. ..
Wow for 2 years she was in coma and doesn't remember anything. ... poor her
Good introduction to the story. ..
1/31/2015 c1 Barbara
wow! This story seems to be great. Please update soon!
wow! This story seems to be great. Please update soon!
1/30/2015 c1 205autumnrose2010
Wow, what a scary experience! Great start, looking forward to reading more...
Wow, what a scary experience! Great start, looking forward to reading more...