for Arya Lily Potter4/2/2023 c60 the Beagle
This story is too interesting! ！！！！！MORE PLEASE!！！！
This story is too interesting! ！！！！！MORE PLEASE!！！！
1/2/2022 c60 everyatom
I just read this story in one go and absolutely loved it. I love the characterization of Arya, and I love her relationships with everyone. It’s a lovely story.
I just read this story in one go and absolutely loved it. I love the characterization of Arya, and I love her relationships with everyone. It’s a lovely story.
9/23/2021 c2 Guest
IT WAS FINE THOUGHT I LIKE HINNY MORE
IT WAS FINE THOUGHT I LIKE HINNY MORE
9/7/2021 c60 Guest
Please please continue... This is a refreshing read and it clearly shows how much thought you have put into it. I love it.
Please please continue... This is a refreshing read and it clearly shows how much thought you have put into it. I love it.
7/7/2021 c60 Patrice
I love that you have a good Dumbledoor and that Ron actually has to do his own work and Snape is not getting away with cruelty to students. I hope you get inspired soon!
I love that you have a good Dumbledoor and that Ron actually has to do his own work and Snape is not getting away with cruelty to students. I hope you get inspired soon!
4/27/2021 c60 gryphan.master900
I'm hoping there is an update in the not too distant future, it's a great story and I would love to see it continued.
I'm hoping there is an update in the not too distant future, it's a great story and I would love to see it continued.
11/28/2020 c16 Child of Dreams
Just looked up the locket and apparently it was gold, sorry for the mistake
Just looked up the locket and apparently it was gold, sorry for the mistake
9/8/2020 c4 
3Pinkypi
I apologize but last chapter was just so off, based on the introduction snippet. It was more in line with a foster child who actually knew love for half their life before being put in the system when their parents died. still say she can't be tall for her age with food punishments doe.
3PinkypiI apologize but last chapter was just so off, based on the introduction snippet. It was more in line with a foster child who actually knew love for half their life before being put in the system when their parents died. still say she can't be tall for her age with food punishments doe.
9/8/2020 c3 Pinkypi
I like the story it's really well imma have to stop you on one thing. Her being tall for her age if food is being withheld as a punishment is physically and magically impossible. Gamps law of transfiguration magic cannot create sustenance. And for children withholding food for a week at a time as punishment even if it was 1 meal each day, but as you sad very little food I'm assuming it's not even enough for 1 meal a day. Means she didn't have the nutrients to grow. As a 7 year old she should look more like a 5 year old. If your going to put the abuse in your story have the respect to put it in all its consequences. I understand that may be what you want her to look like at this age but disregarding the consequence of abuse that results in malnutrition like it doesnt matter is wrong. Yes I know the adults on her side are outraged, but your arya doesnt act like an abused child. Who has been abused as long as she can remember things. Sorry it's a touchy subject and for the abuse to be bad enough for Dumbledore to give up the bloodwards Arya just doesnt match it which makes the results of child abuse feel trivialized
I like the story it's really well imma have to stop you on one thing. Her being tall for her age if food is being withheld as a punishment is physically and magically impossible. Gamps law of transfiguration magic cannot create sustenance. And for children withholding food for a week at a time as punishment even if it was 1 meal each day, but as you sad very little food I'm assuming it's not even enough for 1 meal a day. Means she didn't have the nutrients to grow. As a 7 year old she should look more like a 5 year old. If your going to put the abuse in your story have the respect to put it in all its consequences. I understand that may be what you want her to look like at this age but disregarding the consequence of abuse that results in malnutrition like it doesnt matter is wrong. Yes I know the adults on her side are outraged, but your arya doesnt act like an abused child. Who has been abused as long as she can remember things. Sorry it's a touchy subject and for the abuse to be bad enough for Dumbledore to give up the bloodwards Arya just doesnt match it which makes the results of child abuse feel trivialized