for Never Boring3/21/2019 c1 
27kueroyalt
Ritsu Revenge is coming be scared. Hope Ritsu switches roles giving Takano a piece of his own medicine
27kueroyaltRitsu Revenge is coming be scared. Hope Ritsu switches roles giving Takano a piece of his own medicine
1/14/2017 c1 ReaderAge22
I shouldn't have read this so close to bedtime, 10:31pm here, thankful no college classes tomorrow and HW is done for now. I agree with all 6 previous reviews. Especially the one that review out that I like the additional age and comfort level you gave the 2 lovers.
Something I like most is that you gave all those important safety guild lines. Those are important for everyone (anyone who dose/or reads this) to know. I'm just a medical student and have never been in a relationship like this/intense(I cant find the right word) .
I've taken different classes (too many to bother listing). And basically what I'm trying to say is you nailed it. Those safety guidelines: the sanitation(cleanness/proper care), storage, the dangers of batteries, and the phycology/consent. Oh you implied nicely that we must read instructions, and make sure we understand it(reading dose not always make us use it correctly). Oh and test its strength, like check that its working properly before use. - I'm saying review, the way I am, because I'm doing several classes geared towards chemistry plus surgeries including the proper usage of tools.
So ya I will look at your other stories.
I shouldn't have read this so close to bedtime, 10:31pm here, thankful no college classes tomorrow and HW is done for now. I agree with all 6 previous reviews. Especially the one that review out that I like the additional age and comfort level you gave the 2 lovers.
Something I like most is that you gave all those important safety guild lines. Those are important for everyone (anyone who dose/or reads this) to know. I'm just a medical student and have never been in a relationship like this/intense(I cant find the right word) .
I've taken different classes (too many to bother listing). And basically what I'm trying to say is you nailed it. Those safety guidelines: the sanitation(cleanness/proper care), storage, the dangers of batteries, and the phycology/consent. Oh you implied nicely that we must read instructions, and make sure we understand it(reading dose not always make us use it correctly). Oh and test its strength, like check that its working properly before use. - I'm saying review, the way I am, because I'm doing several classes geared towards chemistry plus surgeries including the proper usage of tools.
So ya I will look at your other stories.
11/24/2015 c1 7Grayluisawesome
You need to continue this. I saw that it doesn't say "Completed", and I really think you should write more of it. This is adorable, sexy, and I loved every second I took reading it. It was this very fanfic of yours that inspired my idea to write one of my own, and that got me thinking about it and got me to come up with an idea for mine. You are simply amazing, and I love you. You seriously need to continue this. 3 3 3 3
7GrayluisawesomeYou need to continue this. I saw that it doesn't say "Completed", and I really think you should write more of it. This is adorable, sexy, and I loved every second I took reading it. It was this very fanfic of yours that inspired my idea to write one of my own, and that got me thinking about it and got me to come up with an idea for mine. You are simply amazing, and I love you. You seriously need to continue this. 3 3 3 3
4/13/2015 c1 3Momiji Colors
Really liked how you were able to show Onodera a few years older and more comfortable in his relationship with Takano. You did a great job of keeping them both in-character, even when Onodera gets so worked up that he acts differently than Takano would have expected from the beginning of their relationship. Also, nice attention to the small details of their relationship and bring out their reactions and emotions in your writing. I'll look forward to more!
P.S. - If you ever feel like doing a Kisa x Yukina or a Nowaki x Hiroki fic, please do it. They're my favorite pairs from SH and JR. 3
3Momiji ColorsReally liked how you were able to show Onodera a few years older and more comfortable in his relationship with Takano. You did a great job of keeping them both in-character, even when Onodera gets so worked up that he acts differently than Takano would have expected from the beginning of their relationship. Also, nice attention to the small details of their relationship and bring out their reactions and emotions in your writing. I'll look forward to more!
P.S. - If you ever feel like doing a Kisa x Yukina or a Nowaki x Hiroki fic, please do it. They're my favorite pairs from SH and JR. 3
2/16/2015 c1 Guest
my computer screen was charred from the hotness in this piece. It was absolutely amazing. And its a wonder you dont have more reviews. Its such an amazing fiction. I read your other fics also and they were all equally amazing. I really like the flow of your stories and the plot also are very good. And of course not to mention, Cerberus' fics are mind blowing. I am a sucker for this type of domestic/family fics of Nostalgia.
will it be possible to continue with Ritsu's plan for Takano? pleaseeeee.
But whatever you decide, we hope to see more of your works very soon in the future. :)
my computer screen was charred from the hotness in this piece. It was absolutely amazing. And its a wonder you dont have more reviews. Its such an amazing fiction. I read your other fics also and they were all equally amazing. I really like the flow of your stories and the plot also are very good. And of course not to mention, Cerberus' fics are mind blowing. I am a sucker for this type of domestic/family fics of Nostalgia.
will it be possible to continue with Ritsu's plan for Takano? pleaseeeee.
But whatever you decide, we hope to see more of your works very soon in the future. :)
2/11/2015 c1 daikiichan08
.GOSH! I shouldn't have read this while in the family home! Ugh! Now, how the hell am I gonna release this... tension? Hahaha! THIS IS SO GOOD IT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL! Ah, what you do to meeeh! Hahaha! Love LOVE THIS! Thank the gods for you and your pervy thoughts, no matter where you are and what you're doing. WEEEE!
.GOSH! I shouldn't have read this while in the family home! Ugh! Now, how the hell am I gonna release this... tension? Hahaha! THIS IS SO GOOD IT SHOULD BE ILLEGAL! Ah, what you do to meeeh! Hahaha! Love LOVE THIS! Thank the gods for you and your pervy thoughts, no matter where you are and what you're doing. WEEEE!
2/1/2015 c1 38The Black Flamingo101
Tentai.t,
Wow, now that was a great piece. I have to say I'm addicted to the way you write Onodera and Takano. It feels so much more mature. Rather than the constant existential crises and anxious inner monologues, the couple here is comfortable, respectful, and extremely playful. Having written these two quite a bit (not to mention their drama), I appreciate you showing a more futuristic version of Nostalgia. Rather than fight and fret because of their past baggage, they now incorporate it into their daily lives as a reminder of their carefree innocence and the love they first felt for each other.
The bondage scene was quite enjoyable. Rather than waxing dark, the scene brings them even closer together in a way. The dark dungeon lord line made me laugh so hard. It's so interesting how even in submission play, they both know that is doesn't lessen the trust they have for each other, even if there were some pajama casualties.
The dog mentioned he was editing something for you, but honestly I only saw snippets of him here and there. This piece felt fresh and original, and I want to congratulate you for a great story that was clearly inspired by experience with love and relationships. The PSA about the toys at the end was a nice as well, considering stories that skip the lube completely annoy me.
This is definitely one for the collection! Keep writing!
TBF101
38The Black Flamingo101Tentai.t,
Wow, now that was a great piece. I have to say I'm addicted to the way you write Onodera and Takano. It feels so much more mature. Rather than the constant existential crises and anxious inner monologues, the couple here is comfortable, respectful, and extremely playful. Having written these two quite a bit (not to mention their drama), I appreciate you showing a more futuristic version of Nostalgia. Rather than fight and fret because of their past baggage, they now incorporate it into their daily lives as a reminder of their carefree innocence and the love they first felt for each other.
The bondage scene was quite enjoyable. Rather than waxing dark, the scene brings them even closer together in a way. The dark dungeon lord line made me laugh so hard. It's so interesting how even in submission play, they both know that is doesn't lessen the trust they have for each other, even if there were some pajama casualties.
The dog mentioned he was editing something for you, but honestly I only saw snippets of him here and there. This piece felt fresh and original, and I want to congratulate you for a great story that was clearly inspired by experience with love and relationships. The PSA about the toys at the end was a nice as well, considering stories that skip the lube completely annoy me.
This is definitely one for the collection! Keep writing!
TBF101
1/31/2015 c1 26floating fog
*Blushing like mad and grinning like one* This was awesome! Hot and perfect and just so them that I atually want this to be a part of the manga!
Loved it!
26floating fog*Blushing like mad and grinning like one* This was awesome! Hot and perfect and just so them that I atually want this to be a part of the manga!
Loved it!