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7/16/2015 c13 1MattyJones
This fanfic is awesome. Do NOT let Dustin get hurt, I beg of you! We're all waiting for the next chapter!
7/11/2015 c13 3Flowslikepixelz
Beta reading? Whassat?
7/9/2015 c13 NightShadow2745
Really fun read. Nice character interactions, development and exposition. Still waiting to find out why the others are so different from Foxy, but even that seems to have it's due time set nicely. I can really see Foxy running around in joy. Would smile if I knew how to. But the... 'Dirty' tactics employed by the others left me a bit confused.
I mean, I can kind of accept that they tried it, but the fact it nearly worked on him doesn't quite seem reasonable. It reminds me of the famous words of CinemaSins, 'The power of boners is stronger'. Whilst this is normally true, it doesn't seem that it should work here. That is, unless they made those animatronics so attractive that he truly couldn't resist, which I find quite difficult for a kids pizza place to have. It doesn't quite match the flow of the story either, granted we are beginning to see his feelings towards Foxy grow, as well as him beginning to notice her rocking good looks. And even then this is only beginning to show up in a small, hinting fashion. To have the others immediately begin pretending to want to hop in bed with him really breaks the flow of the story.
So far really good. Nice ideas, good development and has left me desparate for more. Its rare to find a story with such quality writing and compelling storytelling. This is easily in my top 5 FNaF stories.
And it updates semi regularly (or at least in a bearable amount of time) too. Definitely Number 1 now.
7/7/2015 c13 Dohnaseek9
This is an amazing story. I have the rest are as long as this one
7/5/2015 c13 1OutrunChaff
A miracle... A somewhat non-cheesy friendship Speech? Could it be?! I dunno. Either way, it is really great to know that Foxy finally has someone truly looking out for her.

"People... Freddy Fazbear is in the house..."
That is a phrase so true to this right here. Tension... how so exciting!
7/5/2015 c9 OutrunChaff
Write how you want to write; it is your story, and we all (well, at least a majority) love it how it is.

It'sgreat to know that not all are forgotten. Maybe Mr. Fazbear cares after all, but that'll have wait...
7/5/2015 c13 TheZimZam
Once again, an excellent chapter. I had read the first 12 chapters in one sitting, so the 13th was the first one I was able to really look forward to reading, and you definitely did not disappoint. Can't wait for the next chapter, especially with the cliffhanger at the end of the most recent one. Keep up the good work, and know that your adoring fans are eagerly waiting for the next installment :D
7/1/2015 c13 ultramarinebattlebother
im real exicted to see what happens next
6/30/2015 c13 Hazardwashere
Oh my gosh. This fanfic is one of the best uve ever read. ( srry for grammar phone is tripping.) im favoriting and following this fanfic and you. Keep up the excellent work
6/29/2015 c13 thatrandomguy
so far so good but why didnt foxy wake up dustan or why didnt anyone look to make sure everyone was out of the building
6/29/2015 c13 Guest
This is one of the best fan fics i have ever read the only problem i have is that it takes a bit to upload but that cant be helped keep up the good work :)
6/29/2015 c13 Squall0104
Amazing chapter! Your story just keeps getting better and better, can't wait till the next one.
6/29/2015 c13 Zeil
Hey again! awesome chapter! i like how the story is going. i even love the detail you put in for foxys joints, pretty cool. right now I'm all excited about the night Dustin is gonna go through, i can't wait. i hope everything is good in your side. i know delays suck, but do your best, as always. see you next chapter!
6/29/2015 c13 Guest
Im liking the story so far and I think it has a great future, the your writing is great at making the scenery and characters.
The story also put me on edge when reading, To show you how good the story is I got scared by one of my animals when walking to get a glass of water after reading some chapters, ps that animal was a bunny... I guss it being 1:30 am didn't help either (yes I did stay up until 1:30 reading you story).

So to wrap up I think your story is great and only going to get better, the chapters writen so well that you can scare someone by walking. And also dont worry about the delays in between chapters you can take as much time as you want, its your story, and good things take time to make.
6/29/2015 c13 9ThrashMetalMartin
Damn, that was the best chapter so far! I like how Dustin and Foxy got closer, but now I hope that he will survive long enough to make a connection with the others. Keep on the good work!
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