
6/29/2015 c13 Guest
Im liking the story so far and I think it has a great future, the your writing is great at making the scenery and characters.
The story also put me on edge when reading, To show you how good the story is I got scared by one of my animals when walking to get a glass of water after reading some chapters, ps that animal was a bunny... I guss it being 1:30 am didn't help either (yes I did stay up until 1:30 reading you story).
So to wrap up I think your story is great and only going to get better, the chapters writen so well that you can scare someone by walking. And also dont worry about the delays in between chapters you can take as much time as you want, its your story, and good things take time to make.
Im liking the story so far and I think it has a great future, the your writing is great at making the scenery and characters.
The story also put me on edge when reading, To show you how good the story is I got scared by one of my animals when walking to get a glass of water after reading some chapters, ps that animal was a bunny... I guss it being 1:30 am didn't help either (yes I did stay up until 1:30 reading you story).
So to wrap up I think your story is great and only going to get better, the chapters writen so well that you can scare someone by walking. And also dont worry about the delays in between chapters you can take as much time as you want, its your story, and good things take time to make.
6/29/2015 c13
9ThrashMetalMartin
Damn, that was the best chapter so far! I like how Dustin and Foxy got closer, but now I hope that he will survive long enough to make a connection with the others. Keep on the good work!

Damn, that was the best chapter so far! I like how Dustin and Foxy got closer, but now I hope that he will survive long enough to make a connection with the others. Keep on the good work!
6/29/2015 c13
1The Zambie Man
Great, I love it. The way you write is really clear, and I haven't. Noticed any grammatical errors. I like where this is going, and I look forward to the next update.

Great, I love it. The way you write is really clear, and I haven't. Noticed any grammatical errors. I like where this is going, and I look forward to the next update.
6/28/2015 c13
2DannyPhantom619
Yay! I was mentioned! This is the happiest moment in my life...for today!
So far so good.

Yay! I was mentioned! This is the happiest moment in my life...for today!
So far so good.
6/28/2015 c13
2Godzilla King of Monsters
Please don't hurt dustin
very emotional, awesome, always exciting.
100/100

Please don't hurt dustin
very emotional, awesome, always exciting.
100/100
6/15/2015 c7 Flowslikepixelz
Wow I didn't check for a while -_-
And about that cover. I definitely can't do something like that, but I know someone who can.
Wow I didn't check for a while -_-
And about that cover. I definitely can't do something like that, but I know someone who can.
6/10/2015 c12 Guest
I love it please make a mother soon
I love it please make a mother soon
6/6/2015 c12 Rezkirel
... I need to have an update on the double. I want the Dustin x Foxy shipping. I doubt you'll give spoilers, but are Freddy and the girls going to be evil the whole thing, or until a point where a bigger problem comes forward? Anyway, please refrain from sleep or any form of delay of new chapter. I NEED MOAR! But seriously, take good care of yourself, but get to caring for Foxy.. I want it.
... I need to have an update on the double. I want the Dustin x Foxy shipping. I doubt you'll give spoilers, but are Freddy and the girls going to be evil the whole thing, or until a point where a bigger problem comes forward? Anyway, please refrain from sleep or any form of delay of new chapter. I NEED MOAR! But seriously, take good care of yourself, but get to caring for Foxy.. I want it.
6/4/2015 c12
1OutrunChaff
Poor Foxy, so shy, so fragile.
The implementation of how the game becomes more difficult as the nights progress has been input smoothly here, with a nice explanation - or, at least that's what Dustin assumes (though I think he's right).

Poor Foxy, so shy, so fragile.
The implementation of how the game becomes more difficult as the nights progress has been input smoothly here, with a nice explanation - or, at least that's what Dustin assumes (though I think he's right).
6/4/2015 c11 OutrunChaff
Well, that... happened.
Even without the action, the seduction still held suspense, and that little tip off from Dustin by the end just gave it a great finishing touch.
Well, that... happened.
Even without the action, the seduction still held suspense, and that little tip off from Dustin by the end just gave it a great finishing touch.