for Five Nights At Freddy's: Another Side6/4/2015 c8 
1OutrunChaff
You are very good at writing these sequences. Each character has their own unique style and form, giving them actual character. As always, keep it Up!
1OutrunChaffYou are very good at writing these sequences. Each character has their own unique style and form, giving them actual character. As always, keep it Up!
6/4/2015 c4 OutrunChaff
This chapter really felt like an action movie (as to be expected from an action sequence, but it was more like a movie than a book), and it keeps the reader on the edge of their seat. Nice work, as per Usual!
This chapter really felt like an action movie (as to be expected from an action sequence, but it was more like a movie than a book), and it keeps the reader on the edge of their seat. Nice work, as per Usual!
6/4/2015 c12 Guest
Spend it on foxy
Spend it on foxy
6/3/2015 c12 Cthulhu
You are actually a really great author! I was very surprised at how good this was. Can't wait for more chapters!
You are actually a really great author! I was very surprised at how good this was. Can't wait for more chapters!
6/2/2015 c12 Joshimi
I just have two words for you
Thank you
You have really opened up my world startersoverlegends and i want you to know that ill always support you 100% of the way
Keep up the amazing work
Yours truly
Joshimi
I just have two words for you
Thank you
You have really opened up my world startersoverlegends and i want you to know that ill always support you 100% of the way
Keep up the amazing work
Yours truly
Joshimi
6/2/2015 c12 BlackCat
Hello, me again. i must say, this is really peaking my interest. i hope you continue.
Hello, me again. i must say, this is really peaking my interest. i hope you continue.
6/2/2015 c9 BlackCat
This is really great. its grabbed me and took my attention. came for the romance. but found a good story.
This is really great. its grabbed me and took my attention. came for the romance. but found a good story.
6/1/2015 c12 TheZimZam
Great series, been reading non stop since I found it. Keep up the good work!
Great series, been reading non stop since I found it. Keep up the good work!
6/1/2015 c12 Zeil
Hey! Readed your latest chapter. I want to say thank you for mentioning me and your welcome on the review. Right now I can't wait for the next chapter. I keep thinking on what Freddy and the others are going to do to Dustin. But reading the story thus far and knowing you, I'm sure you'll come up with something great. Good luck, and keep going!
Hey! Readed your latest chapter. I want to say thank you for mentioning me and your welcome on the review. Right now I can't wait for the next chapter. I keep thinking on what Freddy and the others are going to do to Dustin. But reading the story thus far and knowing you, I'm sure you'll come up with something great. Good luck, and keep going!
5/31/2015 c12 TrainerCoral
This is my first time reading FNAF fanfiction and I really really like it. Plz continue writing more
This is my first time reading FNAF fanfiction and I really really like it. Plz continue writing more
5/31/2015 c12 2Goldenstreak1
Hello again, I just read the newest chapter here and just wanted to stop by and give you a good job! i know writing the in-betweens of a story can be rough, especially if it is between 2 major events. Because you need to build it up in a logical and sensible order, while all you really want to do is just rush to the next major action/event, which can kill a story. I have been thinking about how adding another nightguard in the story, but ii realise now that if you are halfway through a book or story and want to add somthing new, its better to just wait until writing another story, as adding somthing big mid-story, like another nightguard, could become a major obstacle in writing becuse if you dont enter it right or let it back your story into a corner, it's really hard to come back from that, prehaps take my idea into account for your next story after you finish this one (hopefully not to soon.)
Bye-Goldenstreak1
2Goldenstreak1Hello again, I just read the newest chapter here and just wanted to stop by and give you a good job! i know writing the in-betweens of a story can be rough, especially if it is between 2 major events. Because you need to build it up in a logical and sensible order, while all you really want to do is just rush to the next major action/event, which can kill a story. I have been thinking about how adding another nightguard in the story, but ii realise now that if you are halfway through a book or story and want to add somthing new, its better to just wait until writing another story, as adding somthing big mid-story, like another nightguard, could become a major obstacle in writing becuse if you dont enter it right or let it back your story into a corner, it's really hard to come back from that, prehaps take my idea into account for your next story after you finish this one (hopefully not to soon.)
Bye-Goldenstreak1
5/31/2015 c12 9ThrashMetalMartin
No, thank YOU for writing another awesome chapter! I hope that sooner or later Dustin makes a connection with the other Animatronics. (CinnamonToastKen style): Stay toasty!
9ThrashMetalMartinNo, thank YOU for writing another awesome chapter! I hope that sooner or later Dustin makes a connection with the other Animatronics. (CinnamonToastKen style): Stay toasty!