for A second opportunity1/7/2021 c35 luvinmylife247365
SEQUEL! Loved it. *slaps all the ppl who were mean to pitch* Hurt him and I will rip the sticks out of ur asses and beat u with them! *hugs the author* so I need ur help am thinking of doing a story with the guardians, pitch and the misers brothers. So like north wind and pitch are friends/ bromance. And they love each other as ? And I need help writing the story...*gives the author a chocolate chip cookie*
SEQUEL! Loved it. *slaps all the ppl who were mean to pitch* Hurt him and I will rip the sticks out of ur asses and beat u with them! *hugs the author* so I need ur help am thinking of doing a story with the guardians, pitch and the misers brothers. So like north wind and pitch are friends/ bromance. And they love each other as ? And I need help writing the story...*gives the author a chocolate chip cookie*
10/2/2019 c17 Arouwuctine
The Sandman doesnt even have a potential for that much spite in the books he even bowed to Kozmotis corpse and mourned his death and even while fighting he didnt outright hate pitch and go out of his way to antagonize, but like besides that I love this, Ill die if its abanadoned.
The Sandman doesnt even have a potential for that much spite in the books he even bowed to Kozmotis corpse and mourned his death and even while fighting he didnt outright hate pitch and go out of his way to antagonize, but like besides that I love this, Ill die if its abanadoned.
10/2/2019 c12 Arouwuctine
For some of the Guardians reactions to him Im surprised he isnt more timid wary and heisitant to trust. Like North Yelling at him about the globe or like really intense bursts of anger would prolly traumatize the poor kid with the fearlings trying to rip him appart too.
For some of the Guardians reactions to him Im surprised he isnt more timid wary and heisitant to trust. Like North Yelling at him about the globe or like really intense bursts of anger would prolly traumatize the poor kid with the fearlings trying to rip him appart too.
10/2/2019 c11 Arouwuctine
Tbh I feel like their reactions are a bit overblown but eh whatever I mean he is still a child regardless.
Tbh I feel like their reactions are a bit overblown but eh whatever I mean he is still a child regardless.
10/2/2019 c1 Guest
Fuck lmao I was like I swear I reconize that name from something and what do you know its from the pines tripplets AU I truely loved that serise. I normally am not into this kind of thing but I love your writting so Ill try it. :)
Fuck lmao I was like I swear I reconize that name from something and what do you know its from the pines tripplets AU I truely loved that serise. I normally am not into this kind of thing but I love your writting so Ill try it. :)
9/10/2017 c30 KitoH
I'm confused
I thought everyone was in the cave and Jack had black hair!
WHAT HAPPENED!?
I'm confused
I thought everyone was in the cave and Jack had black hair!
WHAT HAPPENED!?
5/30/2017 c35 LadyRunaTerra
ok, perdona mi "asombro" ingles
Darling, I love everything your story has and I really expect a sequel.
ok, perdona mi "asombro" ingles
Darling, I love everything your story has and I really expect a sequel.
5/27/2017 c11 
2We Are Renegade Rebels
Wow... Bunny is an absolute asshole. Bastard. Fucking peice of bullshit . Crappy son of a bitch. Damn him to Hell. Motherfucker
2We Are Renegade RebelsWow... Bunny is an absolute asshole. Bastard. Fucking peice of bullshit . Crappy son of a bitch. Damn him to Hell. Motherfucker
5/18/2017 c34 Joe Katherine Knight
I have to say, I just reread this story for the second time, and it is just as enjoyable as before. Creative, thrilling, and heartwarming, this story is great for keeping anyone on their toes.
-Joe.
I have to say, I just reread this story for the second time, and it is just as enjoyable as before. Creative, thrilling, and heartwarming, this story is great for keeping anyone on their toes.
-Joe.
5/13/2017 c9 Toasty the Toastinator
Hello! I would just like to say that I am really enjoying this story! I haven't read all of it yet but so far it's amazing. I'm really liking the father-son bond between North and Jack, and I hope that Pitch joins the guardians or something! There aren't a lot of writers here that put so much of their time and effort into their stories, so I thank you from the bottom of my heart for all that you've done for the people reading your story and yourself. Keep being amazing!
Hello! I would just like to say that I am really enjoying this story! I haven't read all of it yet but so far it's amazing. I'm really liking the father-son bond between North and Jack, and I hope that Pitch joins the guardians or something! There aren't a lot of writers here that put so much of their time and effort into their stories, so I thank you from the bottom of my heart for all that you've done for the people reading your story and yourself. Keep being amazing!
5/6/2017 c4 We Are Renegade Rebels
Addie: Bunny is a dick. I wanna hit him.
Viper: Pitch is weak... I want him as a pet, he'll be totally terrified!
Hicca: Don't be like that Viper, be nice. Hey I like this, very original.
Rebel: Thanx for the PM. My sisters like it, my brothers... Not so much. But it's cool. Keep up the good work.
InSaNiTy: CoOl StOrY dUdE ... tOtEs NiCe
Nyx: ... It's ... Nice
Syx: Cool concept, wicked storyline.
Andie: I hope this turns into a BlackIce fic.
Tryx: Not everything is about gay romance .
Azazelle: This is simply delightful Darling.
Addie: Bunny is a dick. I wanna hit him.
Viper: Pitch is weak... I want him as a pet, he'll be totally terrified!
Hicca: Don't be like that Viper, be nice. Hey I like this, very original.
Rebel: Thanx for the PM. My sisters like it, my brothers... Not so much. But it's cool. Keep up the good work.
InSaNiTy: CoOl StOrY dUdE ... tOtEs NiCe
Nyx: ... It's ... Nice
Syx: Cool concept, wicked storyline.
Andie: I hope this turns into a BlackIce fic.
Tryx: Not everything is about gay romance .
Azazelle: This is simply delightful Darling.