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5/30/2015 c7 so goos
Loved it
5/30/2015 c7 MDJ418
Keep writing! I would like to see what happens! Looking forward to an update.
5/30/2015 c6 MDJ418
Don't be so hard on yourself. It really isn't that bad. Keep writing!
5/30/2015 c7 7Heartsnflowers99
Sorry, Jack is gonna have to what now? I can't get over how good this story is! Please try to update more often!
5/21/2015 c6 Deneyoung1
I really like this story I can't wait till you update it again! I think it's fun since it's so different from the original story. Please keep working on it is hate to see you give it up!
5/16/2015 c6 Guest
Please update! Xoxox
5/14/2015 c6 Guest
Please update when you can.
5/13/2015 c6 Guest
Would love an update! This is one of my favorite stories.
5/10/2015 c6 Miriamg92
update soon please!
4/19/2015 c6 anonymous
Please please update! It's so good!
4/4/2015 c2 KelleyGonser
1 thumbs down from me on movie. I didn't feel the chemistry between Ana & Christian.
3/30/2015 c6 smillss
Good chapter
3/30/2015 c6 1greyfan 79
Omg it was such a wonderful chapter . Jack is a total asshole and pure evil . Yes grey it is your fault she is wanting her own life and you act like you don't give 2 shits so why should ana xxx
3/29/2015 c6 Guest
Great chap, i like it so much, plase update soon youre a great writer
3/29/2015 c6 HUGE fan
I literally have checked everyday to see whether this story has updated. I am absolutely THRILLED to read another WONDERFUL chapter! This is one of my favorite FF stories! I am so sorry that you are feeling down, but know that many of us are here to support you and brighten your day. :) :) :)

You are a phenomenal writer. The tension, anguish, pain between these two radiates off the page. I love how you gave the brief glimpse into how Carrick and Grace may perceive the situation. Carrick is clearly perceptive and seems not too upset about the relationship between these two, while Grace seems to be in denial. It will be fascinating to see what happens as their relationship develops.

I also love how we were introduced to Ross. She sounds like the spitfire that we know and love. This is the beginning of CG and Ross lifelong business and personal relationship. I hope Ross is able to quell some of CG's insecurities. I would love to see Ross meet Ana again. (Now that Ana knows she is gay and not a threat). They should become friends.

I want Ana to find out about Elena. She needs to understand why CG is so distant, confused, and anguished. I cannot wait to see when and if she learns the truth behind what has been happening to her brother.

The introduction of Hyde as the student-teacher is brilliant. Wicked Hyde will not only force CG to wrestle with his jealously and deep feelings for Ana but importantly, will make CG reflect on his own relationship with Elena. It is no different - a grown adult in a position of power preying on a child. Ana needs to draw out the parallels so CG will understand!

Seriously, I love this story. You are a fantastic writer. The journal entries that vacillate between time periods and set the stage for each chapter are amazingly clever and effective!
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