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6/1/2019 c1 James Birdsong
Nice job
2/3/2015 c1 1UndefeatedAura
Wow... I love it!

The words are deep and is very well written...

And I'm intrigued with Elphaba so passionate in her work yet not forming any connections with whom she's working with...
But I know, it's for the greater cause...

I really like it's melodramatic effect (am I using the right term?)... And how the words makes imagery very clear...

Great job dear :)
2/2/2015 c1 22aphleser
My goodness, you're banging out these brilliant stories one after the other, aren't you?! You'll have hundreds soon!
This was utterly wonderful and thought-provoking. And most likely accurate; this is probably the mindset Elphaba employed to keep herself, and others safe. Until Fiyero.
I loved the vivid descriptions, they were so evocative and truly painted a picture in my mind, as cliché as that is. And the language used; wow! So sophisticated and clever, pensive and wondering.
I am in awe. Simply astonishing.
2/2/2015 c1 5EbonyGreen
Ooh, Nice! You really have the feeling that Elphaba is so lonely... Book Elphie is really different from Musical Elphie! Now that I'm thinking of it, I have to read the book further!
Good job!

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