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9/22/2016 c2 Guest
Ahahahahaha! Oh man, this was a funny chapter! I couldn't stop cackling!
8/24/2016 c6 1Ariastella
Dude, look up the guardian spirits known as Lares. I am determined to make this a more common occurrence in the DP fandom. They're, essentially, Hero Ghosts so you can see why I want this.

Any way, I can just SEE Jack & Frostbite being TOTAL bros! Like, seriously! Also, something tells me that Maddie & Pandora would get along swimmingly.
6/26/2016 c2 1Ms MJ
"Danny swore he saw a picture of himself and Sam in a black and purple heart frame fly by." Lemme tell you that cracked me up good! I have been laughing so hard at it!
10/3/2015 c11 9Luna Lillyth
This has been a good AU and I applaud you.
5/25/2015 c5 82Bookworm Gal
So far, this is proving to be pretty interesting and entertaining. The references, both subtle and blatant, to other shows and series are pretty amusing, the humor mostly matches that you might find on the cartoon, and everyone seems in character based upon their personalities at the start of the show. I also find the change you've implemented to the timeline to be interesting. So far, I'm enjoying myself reading this.

My biggest issue, however, is a grammar one. You seem to have some odd formatting for the dialogue. You keep placing the comma after the quotation marks instead of before. And you shouldn't need to have a period and a comma, a question mark and a comma, or an exclamation mark and a comma. For example, this is what you have:

"Also, you saved me there, Danny-boy.", Jack said and joined in the hug, "I knew you inherited our ghost fighting genes!"

What it actually should say is this:

"Also, you saved me there, Danny-boy," Jack said and joined in the hug. "I knew you inherited our ghost fighting genes!"

Another example is this:

"I am not clueless!", Danny protested.

And it should say this:

"I am not clueless!" Danny protested.

Or, as a final example, this:

"Aw, gross! Dude, have you ever heard of toothpaste?", Danny gagged, "Much less 'say it not spray it'?"

It should say this:

"Aw, gross! Dude, have you ever heard of toothpaste?" Danny gagged. "Much less 'say it not spray it'?"

Other than the slightly odd formatting for dialogue, this has been an enjoyable story so far and I plan to read the rest of the story so far. I think that your envisioned misadventures of Danny learning to use his powers are fairly reasonable and fit right into the cartoon. Not to mention his various attempts to devise the phrase "Going Ghost." Good luck.
5/25/2015 c1 DaniellePines
Wow, nailed the Crackpot making the game. They just predicted it was Mr. Crocker.
4/23/2015 c10 DannyPhantomFan1
I like this story. I hope you do more like this one.
4/21/2015 c10 DuskPuffin
Or if they both lose, perhaps they both have to do something.
4/2/2015 c8 Smokeywolf13
Can you please post a chapter for this that ISN'T in binary code? Some of us use our phones and translating it isn't an option for us, and we really wanna read the rest of the story so... No more decoding chapters would be great. Thanks. Seriously, this is really annoying trying to decode it, and as much as I love this story, its almost not worth the extra trouble in my opinion. But I did say almost, cause I really do love this story. :) But please, no more decoding chapters. (I had to log out cause the website wouldn't let me post two reviews while logged in.)
4/1/2015 c9 Trisha
Sadly I don't own a computer, I own a tablet which I can't copy and paste the binary into :( so I can't read this
4/1/2015 c9 NeoOokami
I read fanfics on a mobile app... and I'm unable to translate :(
4/1/2015 c9 25KentuckyWallflower
m... I'm pretty sure this isn't what is suppose to be here. "001110011 0010000000" is what shows up.
4/1/2015 c8 KentuckyWallflower
Love! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
4/1/2015 c9 13Andovia212
01001001 00100000 01100011 01100001 01101110 00100111 01110100 00100000 01100011 01101111 01110000 01111001 00100000 01100001 01101110 01100100 00100000 01110000 01100001 01110011 01110100 01100101 00100000 01101001 01110100 00100000 01110100 01101111 00100000 01110100 01101000 01100101 00100000 01110100 01110010 01100001 01101110 01110011 01101100 01100001 01110100 01101111 01110010 D: y u torture meh, Binas? XD
3/31/2015 c8 DuskPuffin
Books. Why books?! Ah well, good luck Jazz.
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