for Honor-bound6/18/2015 c1 kopa56
Hey,I would have liked to read after ''what'' could you continue it in some way
Hey,I would have liked to read after ''what'' could you continue it in some way
2/5/2015 c1 
11Cassandrala
I love this- a culmination of a few story ideas all rolled into a one-shot :) Excellent job!
11CassandralaI love this- a culmination of a few story ideas all rolled into a one-shot :) Excellent job!
2/4/2015 c1 14Death to elves
The end was funny. ;)
It's just so easy to picture Kili getting into a fight like that. Silly dwarf. Kili and defending honor seem to just go hand-in-hand even if he knows he probably can't win.
14Death to elvesThe end was funny. ;)
It's just so easy to picture Kili getting into a fight like that. Silly dwarf. Kili and defending honor seem to just go hand-in-hand even if he knows he probably can't win.
2/3/2015 c1 sorrellkaren
good story I liked the Kili sticking up for Thorin part. It ended a little too soon. I would have liked to see Thorin and Dwalin go beat the guy to a pulp for hurting Kili and fighting dishonorably.
good story I liked the Kili sticking up for Thorin part. It ended a little too soon. I would have liked to see Thorin and Dwalin go beat the guy to a pulp for hurting Kili and fighting dishonorably.
2/3/2015 c1 5Celebrisilweth
Nice little slice of life. Guess Fili couldn't help adding that last little part?
5CelebrisilwethNice little slice of life. Guess Fili couldn't help adding that last little part?
2/3/2015 c1 105Neocolai
You're writing angst again! 8) I don't know how to handle it ... I'm so happy!
Kili is an idiot - a noble one, but I feel like C'MON JUST - STAY OUT OF ROTTEN PLACES WHEN YOU HAVE FILI'S MONEY! Grr. Really annoyed at the person who hit him, but also annoyed that he was in that spot to begin with. (I'm also writing this at five in the morning right after I got up, so I may not be writing coherently - or reading coherently, for that matter.)
BTW, quick note - the story doesn't say "complete." Is there possibly going to be another one-shot bit added?
You know what, Kili, nevermind. "I am not sorry for what I did. I am only sorry I lost the fight." Give me a nice giant bouncy ball to bounce off your head for being a total nincompoop. Yes, you're being a total Dwarf who is defending his and his family's honor, but seriously? Augh! Okay, I know I'm starting to rant at Kili now, which isn't the point of the story. Bah! Forget it, my brain is in a fog anyways. I'll revisit this later after I've had coffee. ;) Loved the story, and I really want to see more angst soon! 8)
105NeocolaiYou're writing angst again! 8) I don't know how to handle it ... I'm so happy!
Kili is an idiot - a noble one, but I feel like C'MON JUST - STAY OUT OF ROTTEN PLACES WHEN YOU HAVE FILI'S MONEY! Grr. Really annoyed at the person who hit him, but also annoyed that he was in that spot to begin with. (I'm also writing this at five in the morning right after I got up, so I may not be writing coherently - or reading coherently, for that matter.)
BTW, quick note - the story doesn't say "complete." Is there possibly going to be another one-shot bit added?
You know what, Kili, nevermind. "I am not sorry for what I did. I am only sorry I lost the fight." Give me a nice giant bouncy ball to bounce off your head for being a total nincompoop. Yes, you're being a total Dwarf who is defending his and his family's honor, but seriously? Augh! Okay, I know I'm starting to rant at Kili now, which isn't the point of the story. Bah! Forget it, my brain is in a fog anyways. I'll revisit this later after I've had coffee. ;) Loved the story, and I really want to see more angst soon! 8)
2/3/2015 c1 28Pericula Ludus
I'm with Dís! Guys and their stupid "honour"... And she is left to patch them back together as usual... bah! Nothing honourable about broken bones... That having been said, Thorin's "next time, make sure you win" made me chuckle. I can just imagine the look on his face as he says that trying to balance his desire to just go "Yeah, you go, mate!" with his responsibility as an authority figure.
Your portrayal of the way the Dwarves and Men interact rings very true with the Gandalf & Thorin scene from the movies, the moment when Thorin just kind of sighs "here we go again" as he reaches for his sword. I enjoyed getting an insight into that aspect of their life in exile!
Three gold... well, Fíli, looks like you've got yourself a bit of slave labour right there for the next little while!
28Pericula LudusI'm with Dís! Guys and their stupid "honour"... And she is left to patch them back together as usual... bah! Nothing honourable about broken bones... That having been said, Thorin's "next time, make sure you win" made me chuckle. I can just imagine the look on his face as he says that trying to balance his desire to just go "Yeah, you go, mate!" with his responsibility as an authority figure.
Your portrayal of the way the Dwarves and Men interact rings very true with the Gandalf & Thorin scene from the movies, the moment when Thorin just kind of sighs "here we go again" as he reaches for his sword. I enjoyed getting an insight into that aspect of their life in exile!
Three gold... well, Fíli, looks like you've got yourself a bit of slave labour right there for the next little while!