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3/25/2015 c7 MajinBakaHentai
I often look at crossovers of Earth-based fandoms and fictional world fandoms with a bit of distrust, but you have managed to handle this without it feeling ridiculous for someone from Thedas to end up on Earth. Of course a lot of that comes from coming up with a situation where Cullen is transported that doesn't sound totally stupid.

There's also that you sensibly address the fact that he's from a different culture as well, and that he does not simply slip into Wizarding society with little or no trouble. In fact that's the point of the story isn't it? An outsider with quasi-magical abilities stirs everything up by bringing in a different set of morals and a will to fix wrongs.

Anyway, I am liking this story a lot and will keep watching for more of it.
3/22/2015 c7 1Lupi-wolf
I agree on the pairing. The idea of them together s really sweet.
Please update soon.
3/20/2015 c7 9DarowdrynofArcadia
Luna love is always adorable. -
3/20/2015 c7 Guest
At a glance your HP/HG/LL/GW looks like a romantic relationship, you might get people skipping or leaving over that if they don't read the full summary. I almost did since I'd like luna with Cullen and seeing that made me a bit disappointed until I kept reading
3/12/2015 c6 8novonia
A really great story I'm enjoying very much, I have to say I hope cullen has snape busy for dumbledores folly with the ring
3/12/2015 c6 Guest
This is really good, I'm looking forward to reading more of this. I'd even say I like it more than the trilogy
3/9/2015 c6 9DarowdrynofArcadia
This is brilliant, we need more Cullen in HP!
3/3/2015 c6 AdonCa
The sad, really truly sad thing... Is that even after Albus was shown just how badly broken Severus is, how much of a taint he's allowed to fester (how much of Severus' charming behavior comes from that taint, I am forced to wonder)... And then he goes and puts on the ring anyway. Before that, I could possibly understand, he hadn't undergone any revelaations. But after? Seeing the consequence of his decisions and still going forward thinking that he was somehow immune? He deserves what he gets.
3/3/2015 c6 4Dur'id the Druid
The A/S/C scene came out wonderfully. The best stories confront problems like that head on and deal with the consequences. I do hope that Albus can adapt, for all his faults he is trying to be a good man. Ambitious as well, but a good man.
3/3/2015 c6 Preier
very enjoyable chapter.

some nitpicks :
"no, hermione said, she looks like ..."
why would hermione refute ginny's assertion? seems strange that she would know the weasley family THAT well. perhaps use someone that hermione might have met/remembered or change to something akin to "strange, my xxx looks also like that"

"small rest is lingering there" (hermione's wound). remnant or remain rather than "rest", perhaps? (feels like a confusion with the french word "reste", but given that you're from germany...)

thank you for sharing
3/3/2015 c6 2morring star
Cool chapter keep up the hard work.
2/26/2015 c5 Inverness
Eh, this story could have been good but your pointless Dumbledore bashing makes it mediocre at best.

Character bashing is never a good thing. Indulging in character bashing only reduces the quality of the story and undermines the writer's own talents.
2/25/2015 c5 nightwing27
good thing in my stories harry will have his parents alive and they foil that gay old fools plots and they will be heir to the founders and have unbreakable wards in hogwarts and any where they want
2/25/2015 c5 1FreeTraderBeowolf
This is an excellent chapter. As I was reading the last part and thought about other times when Lady Ironsides has appeared I have to wonder if in some way the character and demeanor of Margaret Thatcher played a role in your thoughts?

Oh and one little minor note, when I first saw this story pop up the name Cullen kept bringing up images of Twilight. Damn pop culture.

Anyway despite that annoying association the name Cullen pulls up in my mind, i am completely enjoying the story.
2/21/2015 c4 Arthorius
Love to see Cullen take Dumbles head while calling him a Evil Dark Lord... lol
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