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8/20/2016 c1 Awareness Bringer
Looks interesting enough.
2/24/2015 c1 ShadowCub
Please no Shepard, everyone always throws a Shepard in there and he a alien lover of the worst kind.
2/16/2015 c1 22edboy4926
Interesting intro
2/9/2015 c1 Guest
Grammar could use work. Still good, and I would like to see this continue rather than fall by the wayside like so many 40k fics do.
2/9/2015 c1 DanAbnettFan1997
Grammar could use a big of work, this could also benefit from thorough re-reading to spellcheck, and splitting up the writing more and use more paragraphs to avoid the wall of text. Other than that, the writing is good, and I'm interested to see where this goes.
2/9/2015 c1 wolf
awesome

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