for the life of Harry potter or harry whitlock?2/12/2015 c2 sugarbabies
YOU ARE RUSHING THIS STORY, SLOW DOWN OK. THIS IS A GOOS START, ONE THAT DOES'NT HAVE EDWARD AND BELLA THE MAIN COUPLE. THANK YOU
YOU ARE RUSHING THIS STORY, SLOW DOWN OK. THIS IS A GOOS START, ONE THAT DOES'NT HAVE EDWARD AND BELLA THE MAIN COUPLE. THANK YOU
2/11/2015 c2 
44Padfootette
Fantastic chapter I loved it and I can't wait for more please update soon. Could u please maybe add speech marks when someone is talking as its a little hard to follow but otherwise great story
44PadfootetteFantastic chapter I loved it and I can't wait for more please update soon. Could u please maybe add speech marks when someone is talking as its a little hard to follow but otherwise great story