
3/10/2015 c18 tonycn12
Amazing I have been carefully following this story and you have yet to disappoint. Please continue your story and I hope to see new ones in the future.
Amazing I have been carefully following this story and you have yet to disappoint. Please continue your story and I hope to see new ones in the future.
3/7/2015 c17 alemomo
LOVED IT!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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LOVED IT!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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3/9/2015 c17 Gokaimaster100
the whole fight scene reminds me of Beauty and the Beast where all the servants kicked all of Gaston's lackeys' asses
the whole fight scene reminds me of Beauty and the Beast where all the servants kicked all of Gaston's lackeys' asses
3/7/2015 c17 Guest
Nice story
Nice story
3/6/2015 c17 Guest
I'd say you wrote the fight sequence rather well; it wasn't short or dull, but wasn't stretched out or over exagerated. Looking forward to your next update, keep up the good work! (y)
I'd say you wrote the fight sequence rather well; it wasn't short or dull, but wasn't stretched out or over exagerated. Looking forward to your next update, keep up the good work! (y)
3/5/2015 c17 Guest
The fight was pretty good if I do say so my self. I feel pretty bad for Tim's testicles though.
The fight was pretty good if I do say so my self. I feel pretty bad for Tim's testicles though.
3/5/2015 c17 Guest
Ya did good kid
Ya did good kid
3/5/2015 c17 bardmine4
good work keep going
good work keep going
3/5/2015 c2 bardmine4
lol OK this is good wow did not expect this good of detail from it has me laughing at how low the other stories have been making my expectations of this go but man is this a treat don’t stop this is amazing.
lol OK this is good wow did not expect this good of detail from it has me laughing at how low the other stories have been making my expectations of this go but man is this a treat don’t stop this is amazing.
3/7/2015 c17
7Krillshadow
No worries, it went well. I will keep tabs on you and your story. Looking forward on your next chapter.
krillshadow

No worries, it went well. I will keep tabs on you and your story. Looking forward on your next chapter.
krillshadow