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6StartersoverLegends
To answer your question, it was very good. Definitely one of my favorite chapters to date, if not my absolute favorite. The reason(s) I say that is:
1) there was a good fight scene that wasn't completely 1 sided, as many others on the site are. Instead, you included Tony's struggle, but in the end he still won and made his point clear to Tim- that the animatronics are so much more than what their past dictated, and that he wouldn't hesitate to defend them.
2) leading off from the last point, Tony's rage when Tim called the girls "whores" really reiterated how much he cared for them. It was the perfect mix of showing that he would protect and defend them, as well as showing his emotional connection to them. Also, after the fight when Tony raged against the girls themselves for calling themselves monsters. Even though he was worked up and yelling when he did so, it still served to comfort and reassure each of them in a way.
3) that last paragraph. 'Dawww XD
I really hate to jinx it, but I love how fast you are releasing these chapters. It's really consistent, and I enjoy this story's progression. As usual, good job and I look forward to more.
6StartersoverLegendsTo answer your question, it was very good. Definitely one of my favorite chapters to date, if not my absolute favorite. The reason(s) I say that is:
1) there was a good fight scene that wasn't completely 1 sided, as many others on the site are. Instead, you included Tony's struggle, but in the end he still won and made his point clear to Tim- that the animatronics are so much more than what their past dictated, and that he wouldn't hesitate to defend them.
2) leading off from the last point, Tony's rage when Tim called the girls "whores" really reiterated how much he cared for them. It was the perfect mix of showing that he would protect and defend them, as well as showing his emotional connection to them. Also, after the fight when Tony raged against the girls themselves for calling themselves monsters. Even though he was worked up and yelling when he did so, it still served to comfort and reassure each of them in a way.
3) that last paragraph. 'Dawww XD
I really hate to jinx it, but I love how fast you are releasing these chapters. It's really consistent, and I enjoy this story's progression. As usual, good job and I look forward to more.
3/5/2015 c17 StampedPuma35
Yeah ... Just amazing don't make Tim remember the fight and make sure the animatronics forgive him.
P.S Don't make the manager fire him.
Stamped out!
Yeah ... Just amazing don't make Tim remember the fight and make sure the animatronics forgive him.
P.S Don't make the manager fire him.
Stamped out!
3/5/2015 c17 8TheFallenGodsmen
This is actually one of the top three best FNAF stories out there. Keep up the good work my friend!
8TheFallenGodsmenThis is actually one of the top three best FNAF stories out there. Keep up the good work my friend!
3/5/2015 c17 2DarkShadow2598
Really looking forward to the next chapters and it was a terrific fight scene.
2DarkShadow2598Really looking forward to the next chapters and it was a terrific fight scene.
3/5/2015 c17 9UnitedOsprey1991
It was fine. Though how do you think the new animantronic will fit into this
9UnitedOsprey1991It was fine. Though how do you think the new animantronic will fit into this
3/5/2015 c17 3dragonspinner35
it was pretty badass the way tony whaled on tim but rather him be stuffed in a suit
3dragonspinner35it was pretty badass the way tony whaled on tim but rather him be stuffed in a suit