3/1/2018 c64 1omegawolf000
This is really good bt the lemons should be dragged out a little more but oh well cant wait till the next chapter comes out
This is really good bt the lemons should be dragged out a little more but oh well cant wait till the next chapter comes out
2/15/2018 c64 Nuggets
I wonder who that could be (cough cough mangle lemon chapter )
I wonder who that could be (cough cough mangle lemon chapter )
1/21/2018 c64 Mad Man
Definitely one of - if not - the best fan fiction I’ve ever read. I’m on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. I check back here at least 4 times a week just to be sure haha
Definitely one of - if not - the best fan fiction I’ve ever read. I’m on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. I check back here at least 4 times a week just to be sure haha
1/17/2018 c64 Guest
Plz continue this I love this plz
Plz continue this I love this plz
1/15/2018 c64 candelariaobd
sorry this isn't a review more like an offer
I have seen your work and you're very good at writing.
so I thought why not give you this offer.
To make some money on the side
get paid to write online
check the link out if you're interested
. /
ps I love your story keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter
sorry this isn't a review more like an offer
I have seen your work and you're very good at writing.
so I thought why not give you this offer.
To make some money on the side
get paid to write online
check the link out if you're interested
. /
ps I love your story keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter
1/12/2018 c64 Guest
It will be great if the Purple Guy will be like Pennywise the Dancing Clown,from IT Movie will be all the children souls saying You'll Float is the next chapters coming in?
It will be great if the Purple Guy will be like Pennywise the Dancing Clown,from IT Movie will be all the children souls saying You'll Float is the next chapters coming in?
1/12/2018 c5 Bats1010
dude love the story so far but i kinda wish our oc gets his body fixed with surgery or something
dude love the story so far but i kinda wish our oc gets his body fixed with surgery or something
1/4/2018 c5 2GoldenPheonix25
The story is great so far. Thought I have to ask, was that a Harry Potter reference there?
Leonaloki57
The story is great so far. Thought I have to ask, was that a Harry Potter reference there?
Leonaloki57
12/19/2017 c64 Hf
Take your time. Work and play as you need to. I love your story and your writing, and I want you to continue this. Arguably the best fanfic I've ever read. Hope to see more soon~!
Take your time. Work and play as you need to. I love your story and your writing, and I want you to continue this. Arguably the best fanfic I've ever read. Hope to see more soon~!
12/16/2017 c53 13Alien-kun. Verified hyooman
To quote Jennifer...
Oh boy.
And to quote myself in a lot of occasions...
Dis gon b gud.
To quote Jennifer...
Oh boy.
And to quote myself in a lot of occasions...
Dis gon b gud.
12/8/2017 c64 sonic
I liked the chapter!
I liked the chapter!
12/8/2017 c64 Guest
When the other chapters are going to be released?
When the other chapters are going to be released?
12/8/2017 c34 CipherStar
I love this, this is by-far the best fan fiction I have ever read so far. I hope you keep up the good work, because this stuff is amazing.
I love this, this is by-far the best fan fiction I have ever read so far. I hope you keep up the good work, because this stuff is amazing.