for Five Night's at Freddi's2/7/2017 c61 
33Devlin Dracul
Oh.. My... God. I FUCKING MISSED YOU, DUDE! And that was one hell of a comeback! That lemon was awesome. Course, since it's you, I shouldn't be surprised. Good to have ya back, old friend.
33Devlin DraculOh.. My... God. I FUCKING MISSED YOU, DUDE! And that was one hell of a comeback! That lemon was awesome. Course, since it's you, I shouldn't be surprised. Good to have ya back, old friend.
2/5/2017 c61 FNAF Fan
This was hot. Been following the story for a while, and I like this.
Foxy is my favorite, so I have a suggestion:
When Foxy has her moment with Tony, she surprises him with how soft, tender and gentle she is. Right from the start, she has Mike make her a promise: "If something hurts, or doesn't feel good, tell me right away, and it stops."
Foxy doesn't just "do it" with Tony; they Make Love.
Things like she runs her hands down his legs, massaging the muscles in his leg and foot (which feels wonderful, even for a guy.), gentle kisses on his neck and face, soft hugs, her tail draped over his legs, soft, tender and gentle.
It seems in contradiction to her personality, but Foxy is the kind of gal who likes to dote on a man she loves, and NEVER hurts them.
In her mind, Tony has been hurt enough in life. She wants him to see someone will be happy to cuddle and snuggle him, dote on him, love him and keep him safe.
I could see her setting things up so there's PILES of soft pillows and blankets, candles and lanterns giving sot, romantic light, maybe even rose petals.
A nice, soft but firm pillow behind Tony's back while he sits, and she straddles his lap, but she holds his hands, fingers interlaced, her hook very gently hooked around his wrist.
They gaze into each other's eyes as they have this wonderful, sweet, tender moment.
It's so intense, Tony almost passes out. Foxy is more than happy to drape herself over him like a furry blanket, kisses him, and whispers in his ear;
"Sleep, me Love. I be right here. Foxy loves ye, know that always. Yer safe."
He drifts to sleep snuggled with her, and it's one of those kind of moments where it's forever engraved in his heart.
Trust me, the first time you really make love, with someone who loves you, you NEVER forget it.;)
I see Foxy as soft and gentle inside, but her hard outside is just a mask, and also defense against those who would hurt those she loves.
Lastly, I have one last suggestion:
At the very end of the story, all the girls chip in, and get their hands on new medical prosthetic technology for Tony. (All of this is now becoming real, FYI)
Using nanobots, artificial muscles and such, they help fix his face.
As Foxy says:
"Tony, me Matey, ye got a kind heart. Yer no monster, and yer handsome. We don't want ye to have to hide yer face anymore. We love ye too much."
Their greatest gift, is making him whole again.:D
This was hot. Been following the story for a while, and I like this.
Foxy is my favorite, so I have a suggestion:
When Foxy has her moment with Tony, she surprises him with how soft, tender and gentle she is. Right from the start, she has Mike make her a promise: "If something hurts, or doesn't feel good, tell me right away, and it stops."
Foxy doesn't just "do it" with Tony; they Make Love.
Things like she runs her hands down his legs, massaging the muscles in his leg and foot (which feels wonderful, even for a guy.), gentle kisses on his neck and face, soft hugs, her tail draped over his legs, soft, tender and gentle.
It seems in contradiction to her personality, but Foxy is the kind of gal who likes to dote on a man she loves, and NEVER hurts them.
In her mind, Tony has been hurt enough in life. She wants him to see someone will be happy to cuddle and snuggle him, dote on him, love him and keep him safe.
I could see her setting things up so there's PILES of soft pillows and blankets, candles and lanterns giving sot, romantic light, maybe even rose petals.
A nice, soft but firm pillow behind Tony's back while he sits, and she straddles his lap, but she holds his hands, fingers interlaced, her hook very gently hooked around his wrist.
They gaze into each other's eyes as they have this wonderful, sweet, tender moment.
It's so intense, Tony almost passes out. Foxy is more than happy to drape herself over him like a furry blanket, kisses him, and whispers in his ear;
"Sleep, me Love. I be right here. Foxy loves ye, know that always. Yer safe."
He drifts to sleep snuggled with her, and it's one of those kind of moments where it's forever engraved in his heart.
Trust me, the first time you really make love, with someone who loves you, you NEVER forget it.;)
I see Foxy as soft and gentle inside, but her hard outside is just a mask, and also defense against those who would hurt those she loves.
Lastly, I have one last suggestion:
At the very end of the story, all the girls chip in, and get their hands on new medical prosthetic technology for Tony. (All of this is now becoming real, FYI)
Using nanobots, artificial muscles and such, they help fix his face.
As Foxy says:
"Tony, me Matey, ye got a kind heart. Yer no monster, and yer handsome. We don't want ye to have to hide yer face anymore. We love ye too much."
Their greatest gift, is making him whole again.:D
2/4/2017 c61 Guest
Nice here's the question:are You going to put a topic about the fnaf 4 child and sister location,William Afton and his daugher and his son,Michael Afton?
Nice here's the question:are You going to put a topic about the fnaf 4 child and sister location,William Afton and his daugher and his son,Michael Afton?
2/3/2017 c61 Bears
Congratulations on the newest chapter! Been waiting since chapter 60 (felt like waiting for half life 3) and it was worth it. Excellent wording and perfect story. Keep it up!
Congratulations on the newest chapter! Been waiting since chapter 60 (felt like waiting for half life 3) and it was worth it. Excellent wording and perfect story. Keep it up!
2/2/2017 c61 Guest
While I'm all for smut, and glad that this story finally stopped beating around the bush on the matter, are we finally going to be seeing some of these extensive sub-plots you've been hinting at from the rest of the story Finally be fleshed out?
While I'm all for smut, and glad that this story finally stopped beating around the bush on the matter, are we finally going to be seeing some of these extensive sub-plots you've been hinting at from the rest of the story Finally be fleshed out?
2/4/2017 c61 23All Hail Lord Megatron
Not bad not bad at all your very food with this story as ever it's fun to keep reading it
23All Hail Lord MegatronNot bad not bad at all your very food with this story as ever it's fun to keep reading it
2/4/2017 c61 5Lycoan wolf entity
*trying to hold in my laughter* I'm sorry, but the whole 'fingering Goldie at the end' part was priceless AAAAHHHHAHAHAHAHA! Ahh. Seriously dude, you're doing a pretty good job so far and don't worry too much about your old computer; it happens to the best of us. Heck, I used to use my Surface until the keyboard wore out. Got a new one, and get this...it won't type. I know what you're thinking " well why don't you just type on the screen?" and the answer is. It's cracked a little in the right side meaning I can't use the backspace or enter keys. But I got a new laptop so everything's good.
5Lycoan wolf entity*trying to hold in my laughter* I'm sorry, but the whole 'fingering Goldie at the end' part was priceless AAAAHHHHAHAHAHAHA! Ahh. Seriously dude, you're doing a pretty good job so far and don't worry too much about your old computer; it happens to the best of us. Heck, I used to use my Surface until the keyboard wore out. Got a new one, and get this...it won't type. I know what you're thinking " well why don't you just type on the screen?" and the answer is. It's cracked a little in the right side meaning I can't use the backspace or enter keys. But I got a new laptop so everything's good.
2/3/2017 c61 44PizzaCatDavid
Wow! Just complete WOW!
It was worth the wait and without the doubt one of the best FNAF stories I have read. The fact you stuck by this is simply amazing and I salute you to your dedication.
I truly hope you do more!
44PizzaCatDavidWow! Just complete WOW!
It was worth the wait and without the doubt one of the best FNAF stories I have read. The fact you stuck by this is simply amazing and I salute you to your dedication.
I truly hope you do more!