for A Complicated Thing4/8/2015 c1 
8The Forgotten Traveller
This is not exactly what I was expecting, but not at all in a bad way. I love the different take on USUK you did here. I normally don't really read this pairing, as I prefer FrUK and/or AmeCan, but this is cute!
Anyways, I'm just doing what you did for me! Giving you feedback, that is.
I think you executed the characters perfectly. America is sometimes portrayed as an idiot, and it may be a little canonical, but it still bothers me. And I think Arthur was really in character, too. I like the two like this.
So...I tried to help! I don't think I'm as good as you, but still.
8The Forgotten TravellerThis is not exactly what I was expecting, but not at all in a bad way. I love the different take on USUK you did here. I normally don't really read this pairing, as I prefer FrUK and/or AmeCan, but this is cute!
Anyways, I'm just doing what you did for me! Giving you feedback, that is.
I think you executed the characters perfectly. America is sometimes portrayed as an idiot, and it may be a little canonical, but it still bothers me. And I think Arthur was really in character, too. I like the two like this.
So...I tried to help! I don't think I'm as good as you, but still.
2/10/2015 c1 EverNightlands
Awww, this was so cute! But poor Arthur, it kind of hurts me that in the end, even if he understood that he loved America and that America loved him back, he still felt the need to ask whether if Alfred thought he was using him or not. But America's answer, oh my God, so confident and so very him! XD Anyway, I really liked the story but the sudden change from England's POV to America's POV and back to England throw me off a bit; still, overall, very nice, fluffy one-shot! I hope you'll keep writing this lovely couple!
Awww, this was so cute! But poor Arthur, it kind of hurts me that in the end, even if he understood that he loved America and that America loved him back, he still felt the need to ask whether if Alfred thought he was using him or not. But America's answer, oh my God, so confident and so very him! XD Anyway, I really liked the story but the sudden change from England's POV to America's POV and back to England throw me off a bit; still, overall, very nice, fluffy one-shot! I hope you'll keep writing this lovely couple!