11/5/2022 c17 Guest
Your grammar sucks.
Your grammar sucks.
5/20/2022 c31 2Demiwitch7
Beautifully made, exceptionally funny when needed.
Do try to write your own novel.
I support you wholeheartedly.
Beautifully made, exceptionally funny when needed.
Do try to write your own novel.
I support you wholeheartedly.
5/4/2022 c3 C3nterF0ld
broken..? that's just so needlessly edgy lmao. so unbelievably and unimaginably edgy. the naginata was very cool tho, most people just give mc's katanas and leave it at that but you had him forge a different type of weapon. now I wanna see a pick of an adult heating wielding it
broken..? that's just so needlessly edgy lmao. so unbelievably and unimaginably edgy. the naginata was very cool tho, most people just give mc's katanas and leave it at that but you had him forge a different type of weapon. now I wanna see a pick of an adult heating wielding it
12/19/2021 c14 yourhater
wrong grammar again...duh!
wrong grammar again...duh!
12/19/2021 c6 Guest
Wrong grammar...but a pretty nice story!
Wrong grammar...but a pretty nice story!
12/19/2021 c3 Guest
its knew not know in PAST TENSE
its knew not know in PAST TENSE
10/5/2021 c1 Jerrydamaster
Im sorry, i usually NEVER flame a fanfic before, but the first chapter had me cringing ngl, with everyone just staring at Percy fighting a primordial being and Nico being ooc. Over the top cringe
Im sorry, i usually NEVER flame a fanfic before, but the first chapter had me cringing ngl, with everyone just staring at Percy fighting a primordial being and Nico being ooc. Over the top cringe
4/15/2021 c31 Guest
tehe
tehe
4/15/2021 c30 Guest
wow
wow
3/23/2021 c31 Guest
nice
nice
3/7/2021 c3 Q Q
Idiot, gereksiz...
Idiot, gereksiz...