for The Broken Hero4/3/2019 c31 ImAPyromaniac
*threatening tone* You will update this story now.
*sweet voice* Please.
*threatening tone* You will update this story now.
*sweet voice* Please.
12/27/2018 c31 Guest
Update this story soon
Update this story soon
11/26/2018 c22 Amphtirte
yeah that's probably for the wisest if you don't ask about the hot spring
yeah that's probably for the wisest if you don't ask about the hot spring
11/7/2018 c1 Guest
CAN you continue the story please because I found that it’s a Good concept
CAN you continue the story please because I found that it’s a Good concept
8/10/2018 c31 Guest
Noooooo! Why did you stop?!
Noooooo! Why did you stop?!
5/22/2018 c20 Entropy the Eternal
Not "consummating". Consummating implies sex.
Instead, use "Consuming". This means using, eating, or burning.
Not "consummating". Consummating implies sex.
Instead, use "Consuming". This means using, eating, or burning.
5/8/2018 c31 
15the real narnia
AWESOME. I love this take to story, and the inclusion of Gaia. I'm eager to see where this story goes as it continues. I know it's been years since you've updated, but I hope you haven't dropped this fic. It's really good so far and I'm really looking forward to more or the story. I hope you're able to update soon! Happy writing! :)
15the real narniaAWESOME. I love this take to story, and the inclusion of Gaia. I'm eager to see where this story goes as it continues. I know it's been years since you've updated, but I hope you haven't dropped this fic. It's really good so far and I'm really looking forward to more or the story. I hope you're able to update soon! Happy writing! :)
5/4/2018 c2 7LunaLament
I loved the first chapter of this story, however, I'm not so sure about the second. I do like the mechanical parts, but personally I'm not sure if Percy would cal himself a 'monster' just because of it. He couldve seen it as a way to remember Charles.
Second, I believe his mood swing to Angey was...too abrupt, It wasn't really believable to me.
Also the Laughing on the floor, plus Jason's anger.
However, I do get that that could be explained by a missing bit of his brain, but still...
Anyway, just giving you my thoughts, hope you take them into account!
You're still a great writer, very descriptive. Hope it goes well from here!
~Llew
7LunaLamentI loved the first chapter of this story, however, I'm not so sure about the second. I do like the mechanical parts, but personally I'm not sure if Percy would cal himself a 'monster' just because of it. He couldve seen it as a way to remember Charles.
Second, I believe his mood swing to Angey was...too abrupt, It wasn't really believable to me.
Also the Laughing on the floor, plus Jason's anger.
However, I do get that that could be explained by a missing bit of his brain, but still...
Anyway, just giving you my thoughts, hope you take them into account!
You're still a great writer, very descriptive. Hope it goes well from here!
~Llew
5/3/2018 c31 Guest
Update child
Update child
2/11/2018 c31 Guest
CONTINUE PLZ
CONTINUE PLZ
2/7/2018 c18 1Plasma Dragon 312
Why can’t he convince posiedon to help Medusa? She was a normal girl before so...
1Plasma Dragon 312Why can’t he convince posiedon to help Medusa? She was a normal girl before so...