for Second Wind2/24/2015 c14 Yoooooo
I'm so happy you update so fast :D this is my favorite story!
I'm so happy you update so fast :D this is my favorite story!
2/26/2015 c8 TempestStory
Like your story so far and like what you've done with Luffy and Zoro characters. I believe that Luffy should be more like this in the manga, because while I love Luffy's character and personality, it does get a little annoying at times. it is also a little hard to really believe it at times especially after Sabololly and the Whitebeard War arc. you would think that after he lost his crew right in front of his eyes and then have Ace also die right in front of him that he would mature a little bit.
keep up the good work
Like your story so far and like what you've done with Luffy and Zoro characters. I believe that Luffy should be more like this in the manga, because while I love Luffy's character and personality, it does get a little annoying at times. it is also a little hard to really believe it at times especially after Sabololly and the Whitebeard War arc. you would think that after he lost his crew right in front of his eyes and then have Ace also die right in front of him that he would mature a little bit.
keep up the good work
2/26/2015 c16 Zombietooth
Omg Zoro's coolest moment so far - I loved how he basically threatened a whole town of bounty hunters into submission without lifting a finger xD
That was definitely the most original and creative spin on the Whiskey Peak arc in a OP timetravel ff I've ever read.
And I can't even tell you how happy I was when I realised you still included Luffy and Zoro's fight, even though they probably would have destroyed the whole island had they really meant it...
one last thing, I don't really know when it happened, but you Sanji somehow turned into this sassy Prince of oneliners - and I absolutely love it it!
Omg Zoro's coolest moment so far - I loved how he basically threatened a whole town of bounty hunters into submission without lifting a finger xD
That was definitely the most original and creative spin on the Whiskey Peak arc in a OP timetravel ff I've ever read.
And I can't even tell you how happy I was when I realised you still included Luffy and Zoro's fight, even though they probably would have destroyed the whole island had they really meant it...
one last thing, I don't really know when it happened, but you Sanji somehow turned into this sassy Prince of oneliners - and I absolutely love it it!
2/25/2015 c16 Kojo208
Loved how you was able to keep the fight between Luffy and Zoro(Always love to see them go against each other). I hope you continue this fic to my favorite arc which is Thriller Bark mostly because near the end with Zoro taking on Luffy's pain
Loved how you was able to keep the fight between Luffy and Zoro(Always love to see them go against each other). I hope you continue this fic to my favorite arc which is Thriller Bark mostly because near the end with Zoro taking on Luffy's pain
2/25/2015 c16 
2Monkey D. Funky
Another great update. The way your having each crewmember progress a little differently from canon is nice, like Nami thinking about Zoro and Luffy's connection. I do really like longer chapters, too.
2Monkey D. FunkyAnother great update. The way your having each crewmember progress a little differently from canon is nice, like Nami thinking about Zoro and Luffy's connection. I do really like longer chapters, too.
2/25/2015 c16 11Ghostunderasheet
Luffy... you f***ing moron. Do you have no self restraint? Oh wait... yeah. He would. He so would. So, props for including that when most people would skip it. And here comes Little Garden. Man... it's going to be kind of a let-down compared to last time isn't it? The best part of that Arc was Zoro posing for his death, but that's just so obviously not happening and it'll be no fun without it. Hmm... The only really important plot bits were kicking Mr. 3 (and co.)'s collective asses and Nami getting sick. Will Luffy really let her walk around without a shirt this time? I see him being more careful than that.
And damn it all but I'm curious as to HOW Luffy and Zoro time traveled their consciousnesses or whatever. There haven't even been any hints in that direction. But I can be patient. Keep up the awesome work! I really appreciate it when someone updates their fic so often (Not that I do that for mine...) so it's nice to see.
11GhostunderasheetLuffy... you f***ing moron. Do you have no self restraint? Oh wait... yeah. He would. He so would. So, props for including that when most people would skip it. And here comes Little Garden. Man... it's going to be kind of a let-down compared to last time isn't it? The best part of that Arc was Zoro posing for his death, but that's just so obviously not happening and it'll be no fun without it. Hmm... The only really important plot bits were kicking Mr. 3 (and co.)'s collective asses and Nami getting sick. Will Luffy really let her walk around without a shirt this time? I see him being more careful than that.
And damn it all but I'm curious as to HOW Luffy and Zoro time traveled their consciousnesses or whatever. There haven't even been any hints in that direction. But I can be patient. Keep up the awesome work! I really appreciate it when someone updates their fic so often (Not that I do that for mine...) so it's nice to see.
2/25/2015 c16 Anna Cadwell
Great chapter! Really loving this story! I'm excited for Alabasta. Keep up the good work!
Great chapter! Really loving this story! I'm excited for Alabasta. Keep up the good work!
2/25/2015 c16 12Animegirl1279
So I am curious about luffys statement that they are the best pirate group around and him comparing them with some other great groups. I know luffy thinks that law is great but is he really that trustworthy of a pirate, don't get me wrong I love law but that was just a tough on that part.
Otherwise loved the cjphapter as always thanks for the update.
I just released that Ace should be showing up soon, how will luffy react to seeing his brother.
12Animegirl1279So I am curious about luffys statement that they are the best pirate group around and him comparing them with some other great groups. I know luffy thinks that law is great but is he really that trustworthy of a pirate, don't get me wrong I love law but that was just a tough on that part.
Otherwise loved the cjphapter as always thanks for the update.
I just released that Ace should be showing up soon, how will luffy react to seeing his brother.
2/25/2015 c16 3layla-kyoyama
very good chapter, if he really surprised me about the fight between the two, but narraste that fight so great !, I'm glad upgradequickly, this story definitely has much to offer ! :)
3layla-kyoyamavery good chapter, if he really surprised me about the fight between the two, but narraste that fight so great !, I'm glad upgradequickly, this story definitely has much to offer ! :)
2/23/2015 c13 Guest
This story is really great!
This story is really great!
2/25/2015 c15 11Ghostunderasheet
Damn. I'm so glad you didn't go into detail with everyone's deaths. I nearly started crying in the middle of study hall as it is. Not that I'd ever read fanfiction during study hall. ... Don't judge me. It's a compliment. You're stuff's good enough to distract me from schoolwork! Be flattered! Or you could probably conclude more about my work ethic than anything... Whatevsies. I love the Luffy-Zoro bromance thing you've got going on, and mourn the Zoro-Sanji fights which would be just so unfair right now.
I noticed we didn't pick up Vivi. I'm not complaining. As long as we still kick Crocodile's ass I don't mind... thought to be honest I kind of love the guy, even if he is evil. It's because of his actions at Marineford - helping Luffy escape when he didn't have to. You can't skip the Alabasta arc entirely, if only because Luffy wouldn't miss out on an opportunity to throw his 'trainee' crew up against some strong opponents.
It's kind of a shame that they're going to have to explain haki so many times - every time anyone joins the crew. That'll be a pain in the ass. But worth it.
11GhostunderasheetDamn. I'm so glad you didn't go into detail with everyone's deaths. I nearly started crying in the middle of study hall as it is. Not that I'd ever read fanfiction during study hall. ... Don't judge me. It's a compliment. You're stuff's good enough to distract me from schoolwork! Be flattered! Or you could probably conclude more about my work ethic than anything... Whatevsies. I love the Luffy-Zoro bromance thing you've got going on, and mourn the Zoro-Sanji fights which would be just so unfair right now.
I noticed we didn't pick up Vivi. I'm not complaining. As long as we still kick Crocodile's ass I don't mind... thought to be honest I kind of love the guy, even if he is evil. It's because of his actions at Marineford - helping Luffy escape when he didn't have to. You can't skip the Alabasta arc entirely, if only because Luffy wouldn't miss out on an opportunity to throw his 'trainee' crew up against some strong opponents.
It's kind of a shame that they're going to have to explain haki so many times - every time anyone joins the crew. That'll be a pain in the ass. But worth it.
2/25/2015 c15 12Animegirl1279
Thanks for some background on what happened before, u was wondering, but that was deep, I knew it must have been bad but that was really bad. Good chapter I always wonder about how long it actual takes them on the sea and what they do there.
Can't wait to see what twists you have planed for next.
12Animegirl1279Thanks for some background on what happened before, u was wondering, but that was deep, I knew it must have been bad but that was really bad. Good chapter I always wonder about how long it actual takes them on the sea and what they do there.
Can't wait to see what twists you have planed for next.