
2/5/2018 c2 raven j
I really like the story so far
when will the next chapter be here?
I really like the story so far
when will the next chapter be here?
3/13/2016 c2
4Hivedragon
CLIFFHANGER, CLIFFHANGER... Who planted that ending?! Man I cant wait for the next chapter this is written pretty good some small errors but still good cant wait for the next chapter.

CLIFFHANGER, CLIFFHANGER... Who planted that ending?! Man I cant wait for the next chapter this is written pretty good some small errors but still good cant wait for the next chapter.
10/11/2015 c2 Light Dragon
WOW love it and Nice story hope more is coming.
WOW love it and Nice story hope more is coming.
10/11/2015 c2 silverwolf
write more soon
write more soon
4/4/2015 c2 Rosa2495Quotev
UPDATE this is getting good!
UPDATE this is getting good!
4/1/2015 c2 Guest
Uhhhhhh... I got nothing, your to good for words
Uhhhhhh... I got nothing, your to good for words
3/30/2015 c2 Guest
;):D funny/weird
;):D funny/weird
3/27/2015 c2 Curiosity Kills
Continue please. Cliffys are dangerous
Continue please. Cliffys are dangerous
3/26/2015 c2
3Notrandomatall
Oh my gosh that was awesome! Your really good at creating tension between characters naturally (or as naturally as possible in a story.) Amazing job! :D

Oh my gosh that was awesome! Your really good at creating tension between characters naturally (or as naturally as possible in a story.) Amazing job! :D