for Night Song9/12/2008 c1 Ella
write more. pretty please!
write more. pretty please!
2/5/2003 c1 
2Carcanet
I think you based this on this Chinese movie I saw, I few months ago. It was called Badboy Squad. There was even the serious guy (TK), the player (Matt, he, in the movie also had tarot cards, and the girls always pulled out the Lovers card. Cheater!), there was even a girl (who falls in love with the serious guy, might I add) who also has the trademark lollipop. And, and, and! I'm guessing Joe was the guy (in the movie) who fell in love with that girl (in the movie), who when they found her, she wa burnt by the evil japanese person. I think his name was Taro Kynamoto, or something. The girl the guy Matt plays falls in love, with that clone or something, was her name Eleven? But then, didn't Eleven die? And there was also that Asian Antelope right? What am I doing? Anyway, am I right or wrong, if I am wrong, the movie you must be talking about must be really similar to the one I am. Please continue.
2CarcanetI think you based this on this Chinese movie I saw, I few months ago. It was called Badboy Squad. There was even the serious guy (TK), the player (Matt, he, in the movie also had tarot cards, and the girls always pulled out the Lovers card. Cheater!), there was even a girl (who falls in love with the serious guy, might I add) who also has the trademark lollipop. And, and, and! I'm guessing Joe was the guy (in the movie) who fell in love with that girl (in the movie), who when they found her, she wa burnt by the evil japanese person. I think his name was Taro Kynamoto, or something. The girl the guy Matt plays falls in love, with that clone or something, was her name Eleven? But then, didn't Eleven die? And there was also that Asian Antelope right? What am I doing? Anyway, am I right or wrong, if I am wrong, the movie you must be talking about must be really similar to the one I am. Please continue.
12/22/2002 c1 2Says TB
Ou… interesting! I liked the plot. It’s very original. Your story line is so mysterious and seems to give the story a dangerous feeling. I was able to picture everything I read, and I can only do that with good fics! + I loved your beginning. It really hooked me to the fic. Newayz, hope to see updates from u…
-gots ta be takari's baybee
2Says TBOu… interesting! I liked the plot. It’s very original. Your story line is so mysterious and seems to give the story a dangerous feeling. I was able to picture everything I read, and I can only do that with good fics! + I loved your beginning. It really hooked me to the fic. Newayz, hope to see updates from u…
-gots ta be takari's baybee
12/6/2002 c1 Rizza426
Great story so far! Please continue writing it. I wanna know what happens next.
Great story so far! Please continue writing it. I wanna know what happens next.
12/5/2002 c1 white lily
I like this a lot, please update soon i'd love to know what's going to happen :)
I like this a lot, please update soon i'd love to know what's going to happen :)
12/5/2002 c1 Savoan Locc
This ficc succs a joumi wow!
This ficc succs a joumi wow!