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8/6/2017 c10 2KelseyNicole08
poor Bass. Kills me LOL
5/6/2015 c10 10banneg
- It was fun to think of Charlie trying to get Bass to 'write' her paper for her! -this idea is so much fun because I am confident that Miles would have been a better father than Rachel was a mother. - B
4/27/2015 c10 19IceonFire7
I really enjoyed all of these so very much. It was nice to get a glimpse of Charlie growing up and the influence of Miles and Bass upon her life. Really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing these.
4/18/2015 c10 BassCharlie-SparrowHawke
These have been so wonderful I have loved each and every one of them. Bass was hilarious in this one...he is pouting almost as much as Charlie lol. I'm so glad that you gave us these flashbacks they were truly special.
4/18/2015 c10 2Hollywoodlove09
Loved all the chapters thay were great back stories. Hope u right more stories
4/9/2015 c9 19IceonFire7
I'm a little late to review this chapter, but I needed you to know that I loved it. You write them all so well. I loved that she wanted her tongue pierced and Miles has to tell her that it hurts. Also, love that Bass says "Someday, some lucky guy will love you exactly the way you are." How awesome that the lucky guy is Bass. Looking forward to another one of these.
3/22/2015 c9 10banneg
Hi - This is such a fun story. The idea of how Miles would react to everyday raising a little girl with all the energy and brains of Charlie is really intriguing and I love seeing where you take it. - B
3/17/2015 c9 perfect.manhattan
So cute! I loved it!

jenn.
3/17/2015 c9 BassCharlie-SparrowHawke
This was great...I love how Miles says no before she even asks lol. Poor Miles was a little lost for words, but Bass was there to help out his brother. Charlie's reaction to Bass telling her that 16 yr old boys only want one thing "Ew, Bass." I loved what Bass said to her though. Little did they know it would be Bass who would love her for exactly who she is "hole-less tongue and all" lol. Miles was in for a lot of tough teenage years. I wish he could have seen her and Bass happy together.
3/8/2015 c8 banneg
Hi -
I love this story! The idea of a 4 year old Charlie calling Bass and Bass dropping everything shows how much he values family and he was so comforting to her. My favorite part was her attacking the paramedics. - B
3/3/2015 c8 19IceonFire7
These are always so fabulous. And this one in particular was really fantastic. I love how Bass came running for his family. And Charlie called him first after she couldn't wake Miles. Not Rachel, she called Bass...

Well, I'm looking forward to more. I know you said you only had two more. If I think of anything great, I'll let you know.
3/2/2015 c8 perfect.manhattan
LOVED it! Best damn motto in the world. I loved the image of a 4 year old kicking the hell out of an EMT...so funny!

jenn.
2/27/2015 c8 BassCharlie-SparrowHawke
Wow...I really didn't think I could hate Rachel anymore that is until she showed up at the hospital, and when she said "I' m taking my son home" I wanted to smack her. Loved Charlie such a little spitfire going after the paramedic I'm just glad Bass was there to take care of her.
2/26/2015 c7 10banneg
Now that I am all caught up... I have to say that this was the chapter I was really looking forward to! I imagined you would write about her bringing home a boy and I love them discussing 'getting rid of him'! It just felt so in character. I am so looking forward to reading more - B
2/26/2015 c6 banneg
I loved that she initially turned to Bass in this moment and then later remembered that a drunk driver was how his family had died. And it was so realistic to have her want to see comfort and a little discipline from Miles- B
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