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11/24/2017 c41 1Mastermind4892
Stars and skies! This story is nothing short of MAGNIFICENT! This is a perfect representation and portrayal of everything that I imagined when I first wondered how the world of Equestria would have entered the universe of Mass Effect!

This series of stories you've written is so well thought out. You have done it. A true, indepth and full immersion of both worlds. You keep to the script while also having a fantastic abundance of creativity, adaptation and original scenes and plots! What I especially love is how true this story has held to the characters from both series, how much you've brought them to life. You've done so well with Twilight's love of academics, the weight of her responsibility to the Princess and the doubts and worries she feels along the way. The same for Applejack's nature, Rarity's polite mannerisms and Rainbow's proud and snappish attitude... you brought them to life quite well! And the famous Normandy crew, with Garrus' dry wit, Wrex's casual bluntness and Liara's adorable inexperience... you blended and integrated them together with Equestrian characters so smoothly! Joker's banter with Spitfire is a very fine example! And I'm quite glad (and relieved) that you've written the Council in an ACCURATE and reasonable way, rather the completely blind, condescending and irrational way so many other authors choose to describe them. And finally, I especially adore your portrayal of Celestia and Luna. Regal, wise, kind and powerful, taking well to the matters of the Mass Effect universe, and gaining both admiration and respect that they are due.

THIS is what we do to show our love and appreciation for the series we love. This what makes true magic. You have made the best full-length crossover between MLP and Mass Effect on this site, and you deserve every bit of praise that comes your way. Once I read the prequels and could see how much thought was put into such work, I fully intended to write a review for each chapter of the main story. And yet, I was so riveted every step of the way that I could not help but immediately jump to the next chapter to see what would happen next.

So much potential to be found here! The first snowfall of impossible change. Old lives undone, left behind. Strange faces, made familiar. New nightmares, to challenge sleep. New friends, to feel safe with. The Reaper invasion will be stalled, Saren will be defeated, the galaxy will be saved and the Normandy crew will become legend. And alongside them, the Bearers of the Elements will shine again, brighter than any star, bringing new life, wisdom and happiness to the galaxy. And all of that... will only be the beginning.

So, Meluch. Shall we begin?
11/22/2017 c21 Mastermind4892
And the journey begins! Two ships, two bands of heroes in the making, and now one epic adventure to save the galaxy!
6/26/2017 c40 Guest
Please continue I need moar
12/10/2016 c39 1guisniperman
This story is freaking awesome! I like it, I love it!
10/10/2016 c39 aDarkOne
This is an interesting development.
Although I wonder what happened to Tela Vasir.
8/6/2016 c38 aDarkOne
I wonder if the Princesses could use magic to fix Indoctrination?

Also, the galaxy will sh*t a brick when people realize the Rachni are back AND their shapeshifters!
1/15/2016 c31 2xXxjfreed21xXX
Just write like 5 ch.s and upload all at once so i can get some satisfaction, it's like having 1 potato chip.
12/20/2015 c30 Anonymouskrytic
There are some stories that i like to add to my collection of stories worth reading and these have earned that respect from me, however save for relationships between Octavia and Vinyl and from what it seems with Shepard and Liara, once in my collection i will change the other relationships to opposite genders because if so many of the characters have the same kind of relationships then it is boring. Gotta have a m/f relation for some of them. Twilight and Gilda will stay close friends in my collection however i'm not going to have them fall in love with each other so i'll add another character for one of them. i do not mean to offend you but just please don't make this story boring.
12/20/2015 c30 The thief
I am not one for f/f or m/m but i let it slide for mass effect but please do not make it all the relationships the same it makes the story too predictable and predictable is boring.
12/9/2015 c30 aDarkOne
Hmmm...the ending of the Chapter was unexpectedly dark.
11/9/2015 c28 aDarkOne
I am confused, who and/or what is invading and taking over Noveria?
10/31/2015 c27 aDarkOne
I still want to know if Celestia had anything to do with setting SMILE up as spy ring.
10/22/2015 c26 aDarkOne
I can't help wondering just what the original purpose of SMILE was?
8/13/2015 c1 xXxjfreed21xXX
Shame this fic is hidden in crossovers if itd been more visible youd probably have tons of follows and favs, def one of my favorites in all the ongoing stories.
6/28/2015 c22 DigiSim
Pinkie and Maud? Excuse me while I laugh my head off.
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