for Revealed Lies6/8/2018 c14 Violet
Emotive story, beautifully told with insight. I hope you're okay.
Emotive story, beautifully told with insight. I hope you're okay.
6/3/2016 c2 OurLadyOfTheDragon
This is very interesting so far. However, I don't think you have gotten the reactions quite right for what would happen when Scott meet Alan again, and then the Family...
This is very interesting so far. However, I don't think you have gotten the reactions quite right for what would happen when Scott meet Alan again, and then the Family...
12/20/2015 c14 
4OceanBlueSpirit
Aw not again, come on Alan don't go with Matt. Running away doesn't solve anything, that has been made very clear already, and how will things with his family be then. They will become more strained and it will be harder for Alan to reconnect with his family again, it was hard enough this time as it is.
I do think his family need to stop being the way they are with him though, they want him to stop using drugs as a way of coping so they need to help him cope instead of being the reason why he needs the drugs.
Please don't have Alan leave his family again, it's getting annoying the way he's running off instead of facing the problem all the time. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next though. :)
4OceanBlueSpiritAw not again, come on Alan don't go with Matt. Running away doesn't solve anything, that has been made very clear already, and how will things with his family be then. They will become more strained and it will be harder for Alan to reconnect with his family again, it was hard enough this time as it is.
I do think his family need to stop being the way they are with him though, they want him to stop using drugs as a way of coping so they need to help him cope instead of being the reason why he needs the drugs.
Please don't have Alan leave his family again, it's getting annoying the way he's running off instead of facing the problem all the time. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next though. :)
11/14/2015 c13 5Xxxx.2345
Finally got the chance to read this fully and I loved it! Amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter :)
5Xxxx.2345Finally got the chance to read this fully and I loved it! Amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter :)
11/14/2015 c13 4OceanBlueSpirit
Great to see another chapter. If Jeff even suggests to Alan about sending him away again, even if it is to try and help him, he is going to ruin his relationship with Alan. Sending him away won't help, it will just make Alan feel even more unwanted and like he's in the way and not good enough. At least that's something that Scott stands up for Alan on instead of shouting at him.
Watching Alan constantly is a bit much, they need to give him a break sometime other wise he's going to start keeping things from them just to try and have some control back. How can they expect Alan to trust them if they don't trust him.
I wonder how the meeting with Lancaster will go, will it be successful or will it make things worse for Alan. Also will he hurt himself again some time or go to his brothers for help so he doesn't.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :) xx
4OceanBlueSpiritGreat to see another chapter. If Jeff even suggests to Alan about sending him away again, even if it is to try and help him, he is going to ruin his relationship with Alan. Sending him away won't help, it will just make Alan feel even more unwanted and like he's in the way and not good enough. At least that's something that Scott stands up for Alan on instead of shouting at him.
Watching Alan constantly is a bit much, they need to give him a break sometime other wise he's going to start keeping things from them just to try and have some control back. How can they expect Alan to trust them if they don't trust him.
I wonder how the meeting with Lancaster will go, will it be successful or will it make things worse for Alan. Also will he hurt himself again some time or go to his brothers for help so he doesn't.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :) xx
8/5/2015 c12 4OceanBlueSpirit
Scott was rather harsh here, blaming this all on Alan. If they hadn't been so cruel to Alan and sent him away in the first place none of this would have happened.
Poor Alan, now he's hurting himself to try and cope with everything that has happened, and he doesn't want to be left alone, maybe in case he goes further. He's really struggling and this is when he needs his family to help him, not Tin Tin. She's the last person he needs, especially as he's just lost Katie.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :) xx
4OceanBlueSpiritScott was rather harsh here, blaming this all on Alan. If they hadn't been so cruel to Alan and sent him away in the first place none of this would have happened.
Poor Alan, now he's hurting himself to try and cope with everything that has happened, and he doesn't want to be left alone, maybe in case he goes further. He's really struggling and this is when he needs his family to help him, not Tin Tin. She's the last person he needs, especially as he's just lost Katie.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :) xx