
2/26 c1 arianamax177
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9/29/2024 c46 Guest
this was a great story but needs more chapters
this was a great story but needs more chapters
7/31/2024 c28 stillfreeleader
Youre Iron Man 2 is all out of order. The court scene was the beginning of the movie, and Nat was part of Stark industries before the Monaco race because she was IN Monaco when that happened. If this is on purpose maybe make a note so the reader knows? Otherwise it just seems messy.
Youre Iron Man 2 is all out of order. The court scene was the beginning of the movie, and Nat was part of Stark industries before the Monaco race because she was IN Monaco when that happened. If this is on purpose maybe make a note so the reader knows? Otherwise it just seems messy.
7/30/2024 c21 stillfreeleader
My only issue with this story so far is that you keep implying that dumbledore didnt want harry to know about the magical world. I dont believe that the whole letter he gave to the dursleys was ever told to the readers however i do not think that was part of it. He did say out loud though to Mcgonagall that he didnt want Harry raised in the magical world because of the instant fame he was given. In original canon it was the Dursleys that didnt want Harry to know about the magical world. Perhaps its just a change you made but its being inferred based on a letter that you, like rowling, havent let the readers well read. So for all we know its the same letter as canon.
My only issue with this story so far is that you keep implying that dumbledore didnt want harry to know about the magical world. I dont believe that the whole letter he gave to the dursleys was ever told to the readers however i do not think that was part of it. He did say out loud though to Mcgonagall that he didnt want Harry raised in the magical world because of the instant fame he was given. In original canon it was the Dursleys that didnt want Harry to know about the magical world. Perhaps its just a change you made but its being inferred based on a letter that you, like rowling, havent let the readers well read. So for all we know its the same letter as canon.
9/11/2023 c25
4divawife
Loving this. I'm a huge fan of stories that are a brand new brainchild. I hope you update soon. In reading this for the second time.

Loving this. I'm a huge fan of stories that are a brand new brainchild. I hope you update soon. In reading this for the second time.
8/27/2023 c25 Cata
I think hermione and krum would be perfect for each other when he comes along
I think hermione and krum would be perfect for each other when he comes along
7/18/2023 c46 aiatin
I hope you will still update. I've been waiting. I also hope you're doing alright
I hope you will still update. I've been waiting. I also hope you're doing alright
5/28/2023 c46 dreaminggirllivi2
I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I have reread it multiple time and I would love for it to continue.
I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I have reread it multiple time and I would love for it to continue.
4/5/2023 c46 Hermione24
I have been following this story for a long time and I have loved it from the start. I am so hoping you will get back to this story and update it. Please please please...
I have been following this story for a long time and I have loved it from the start. I am so hoping you will get back to this story and update it. Please please please...