
6/1/2015 c1
2Ravengal101
I like how symbolic the gifts were. The generous shopkeeper was a nice touch too. ;) Lol! Good job.
P.S. The summary doesn't do your story justice, or rather, it makes it seem awkward/clumsy when it isn't. The "Well more like Neji's first gift and kiss and Tenten is stepping up on the gift." gives too much away, don't you think? I believe the summary could do well without that line.

I like how symbolic the gifts were. The generous shopkeeper was a nice touch too. ;) Lol! Good job.
P.S. The summary doesn't do your story justice, or rather, it makes it seem awkward/clumsy when it isn't. The "Well more like Neji's first gift and kiss and Tenten is stepping up on the gift." gives too much away, don't you think? I believe the summary could do well without that line.