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5/1/2015 c7 2som04
As always a lovely story.. grwat work. :) :)
5/1/2015 c7 58gothicbutterfly95
Beautiful ending, if short, but then short can be good (most of my stuff short)
Sad it's over but it was awesome. I love this Elsa.
5/1/2015 c7 L0vERead1nG
A briljant story!
4/29/2015 c6 33augiesannie
Oh, wow. I already thought this whole idea was brilliant, but even after 5 chapters, when I got to this part , I was freshly blown away by the retelling of the Laendler - how different Elsa's lines are about their being a lovely couple, and it seeming warm. And G's rudeness to Maria is so different too, in the very different context you have created so beautifully. I was really nervous during the scene in M's bedroom, I was scared it might all fall apart and M would run away but she didn't! And I can't wait to see what's next!

PS the writing about the party was so vivid I thought I was there!
4/26/2015 c6 24charleybec
I could start with apologies for the late review, but I already know you understand why :)

I love this chapter. Sigh. So many reasons: Most of all I just love your writing so much! So wonderful, brilliant and descriptive... sigh I could read your stuff all day. Anyway, the chapter... I love the start of the party with Elsa finding Max. I love how Elsa has set max up to ask Maria to stay for the party. Such a cool flip from the movie where Elsa practically sends death glares to Max when he asks Maria to stay and be his dinner guest. I loved how Max has also noticed the growing attraction between Maria and Georg. Georg smitten. Oh YES! Then I loved the description of Elsa watching Maria and Georg dance the Laendler (again, love the contrast with this version compared with the movie). BUT masterpiece! The bedroom scene with a twist! Elsa is not there to scare Maria away, but to HELP HER! I loved the tiny bits of repurposed dialogue mixed with bits of new dialogue. It worked so so well (especially when Elsa tells Maria how she knows Maria is in love with Georg but then reveals how Elsa and Georg have broken things off). Then Elsa producing THAT dress for Maria to wear (your choice of dress for Maria was just perfect!) But the best bit was the end bit, when Maria arrived downstairs and the crowd parts to reveal Georg and he sweeps Maria into the grand waltz. SWOON! Me in a big puddle! I love this romantic stuff between our couple!

Oh I just loved reading this chapter again and I hope it won't be too long before you update! Great work!
4/25/2015 c6 602Ghostwriter
Oooooh! I like this idea! Wonderful job. I assume you're incorporating some elements from the play (such as the Baroness' take on politics) as well? Great work. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.
4/20/2015 c6 BrittanyLS
As much as I love TSOM, I wish this scene could have happened instead
4/18/2015 c6 35lemacd
asdfjkl;asdfjk; it is like you hopped into a time machine, found robert wise and said, "hey bob, love the script, really... love love love. but what if at this one moment, we have elsa say this..." and it's uh-may-zing! i love the way you have totally reinterpreted almost every single scene, line, moment of this part of the movie. and elsa, so quick on her feet but smoooooth. she just put RM out of a job.

i'm so sorry that my review is late. i could give a couple really good excuses but i won't because of reasons. great story. keep it going!
4/13/2015 c6 Maria
Awe :) That's sweet.
4/14/2015 c6 UnfollowTheSun
I love the impishness of Max in this chapter, he's relishing his role as matchmaker and amused by it all. The way he laughs at Maria for turning 'three shades of pink' when she notices the Captain watching her is amusing. I like Elsa's dig at Franz too. Another good chapter.
4/13/2015 c6 58gothicbutterfly95
Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant! This is Elsa at her best. I was worried for a minute there you have Maria run away anyway, but nope! Oh this is just too good!
4/13/2015 c6 2patrickssong
This is beautifully done. A sweet and poignant piece with so much to love.
-I love that Maria and Georg are so cute in their attraction to one another - Georg acting like a child and Maria blushing everytime Georg looks at her
-I love that Max is in on it. I like Max as a match maker. He is awesome.
-I love the way you have manipulated the lines from the film to fit in perfectly with the situation - such as Elsa in Maria's bedroom.
-Maria's dress - just divine.
-Elsa hating on Franz's attitude - join the the club!
-Those last two lines - simply perfect. I was just swooning!
4/13/2015 c6 12ClimbEv'ryMountain
Bravo Elsa! Bravo!
4/13/2015 c6 1mvtfan
That was very sweet! I like seeing Elsa being so kind! Ready for the next part!
4/13/2015 c6 donnymad
That was such a brilliant chapter can't wait for the next xxx thank you
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