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7/11/2015 c6 6Jokerisdaking
Why does your Naruto feel nothing for Himawari? I like your story a lot but dang. He seems to feel nothing for his daughter. He doesn't even think about her.
7/11/2015 c6 3samuraipanda85
Kind of an expected outcome, but well executed.
Here's a suggestion if you want to add weight to the consequences of Naruto's choice. If you're willing to depict Hinata as a little OOC, you can have the Hyuga clan threaten a coup to get back at Naruto for this outrage. Maybe have them claim Bolt as a Hyuga so they can take him away from his father and hold him in the Hyuga compound. Forcing Naruto to think up a peaceful solution to the Hyuga clan so that they don't become the next Uchiha massacre. Then Sakura can meet up with Hinata and remind her who the real main heroine of this series is, if you catch my meaning.
You could also have Kiba and some of his clan members side with the Hyuga.
I understand that it'll be a stretch to want to organize a coup after one affair, but so far this entire affair has been consequence free. Sure people get upset, but by the end of the chapter they have gotten over their anger and are all accepting and sh*t.
And if anyone's got the right to be pissed about this whole thing and flip out, it's Hinata. She never asked to be involved in any of this Team 7 love triangle bullsh*t. She just loved Naruto from the beginning with no strings attached. But she got led on reguardless. And now she looks the fool for loving Naruto first by seeing only his good qualities. She is suffering because she loved him and had the gall to think she could get a fairy tale ending. I think she's allowed to flip the f*ck out at this point.
7/11/2015 c6 1Black Caesar
This was a good Tale I actually think it would be if it ended right here and you have Kishi peg as he did make Sasuke look like a great father in the last issue of the Gaiden series but it's hilarious also because of how he treats Sakura as he leaves again. Hinata is only shown once throughout the entire series Karui got more exposure lol
7/11/2015 c6 13narusakufan1985
Well I'm glad Naruto keeps his title. Only 3 chapters left until the end. I can't wait to see what happens next.
7/11/2015 c6 8violetvolpe
*fangirling xinfinity* it was so goooood! That meeting though! I was literary eating the chapter up. I can't wait for the next one!
7/11/2015 c6 21Czar Joseph
About time you came around. Seems Naruto told the council about his divorce with Hinata.

The council vote to keep Naruto's title. So now Naruto will married soon.

Excellent friend...really! Let's hope I can read next.
7/11/2015 c3 1Black Caesar
Yes finally someone that understand Narutoverse relationship but I think Clan system is the reason for this plus I think it's a matter of choice possible since Sakura's mom name is Haruno but could possibly be Inoichi's sister. I think you should keep Sarada as Uchiha because she does still belong to the clan even if her mother divorces Sasuke
7/11/2015 c6 loganhunter2
The kage protect the village to the end as well as the shinobi and I'm glad he chose family over a title. ...they knew he would always care for the village but a leader that can be honest about his mistakes and own to the is better than a perfect one ...then there is the fact that no one in the world can really fight him 10 / 10.
7/11/2015 c6 8Hikari Hyun Arisawa
Yeah! Happy ending for narusakuboltsara XD author-san, you mentioned shikaino on chapter 2, could you make a little shikaino moment in next chapter? I mean, I love them together since forever. Hahahaha
7/11/2015 c6 3Plutone-pilot
I can't say much for this except well written. The split of the Council was well done and fairly split.
7/11/2015 c6 snake1980
man what a chapter. this story keeps getting better and better. I cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter. and I can just see hiashi just doing something to naruto to make him loose his title. keep up the great work
7/11/2015 c1 1Black Caesar
I could actually really believe that occurring with the way the Naruto Gaiden series went. I definitely hate Naruhina not saying I'm a NaruSaku fan but it's still better than THAT lol. The movie movie makes it seem like he was force to be paired with Hinata with added push from Sakura who could always get him to follow any request she made
7/11/2015 c6 Tsukoblue
Great chapter!
7/11/2015 c6 bankai777
You should have Gaara's reaction to the divorce.
7/11/2015 c6 10GeminiFletch
Beautiful chapter... However I do reccomend Lengthening your chapters... they are a bit too short
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