
2/20/2015 c1
3lly1226
Oh this is so sad,I am in tears! I think you are good at descriping that atmosphere. And the last question broke my heart indeed ! Well perhaps it's OK if they end like this considering how damn Rumpel is.(sighing )

Oh this is so sad,I am in tears! I think you are good at descriping that atmosphere. And the last question broke my heart indeed ! Well perhaps it's OK if they end like this considering how damn Rumpel is.(sighing )
2/19/2015 c1
10echofinley
That was sad but a good story. I just think rumple made a mistake I do think Belle really loved him and he her but now he's condemned her to a loveless life. Still it was well written and a cool story.

That was sad but a good story. I just think rumple made a mistake I do think Belle really loved him and he her but now he's condemned her to a loveless life. Still it was well written and a cool story.
2/19/2015 c1
41ladybugsmomma
I don't like this ending. My heart broke! It was great work though! I'm in tears!

I don't like this ending. My heart broke! It was great work though! I'm in tears!
2/19/2015 c1
9VyeLoyomBrightwarrior
This was great! It was really sad but very well written. I loved everything about it, even the sadness.

This was great! It was really sad but very well written. I loved everything about it, even the sadness.
2/19/2015 c1
41NejiHina100
great story and i like how you took the bold step to really changing it. when i read that it was him and bae at the portal, i knew where this story was headed. never to see each other again? broke my heart. but great writing. :)

great story and i like how you took the bold step to really changing it. when i read that it was him and bae at the portal, i knew where this story was headed. never to see each other again? broke my heart. but great writing. :)