for The Hale Pack9/17/2015 c24 
1DragonDCelina
Love it!
Cora is back! Yeah baby!
I can imagen the house, it is awsome!
Thanks for the Pack Fluff;*
I really enjoid reading and i hope you update soon!
DDC
1DragonDCelinaLove it!
Cora is back! Yeah baby!
I can imagen the house, it is awsome!
Thanks for the Pack Fluff;*
I really enjoid reading and i hope you update soon!
DDC
9/16/2015 c24 Half Alien
Ok, overall I liked this chapter. But there is finally one thing I'm not crazy about. I have to agree with Scott and Allison, Calling Stiles mom is mega weird. I really hope that doesn't show up a lot in the future chapters. It won't stop me from reading but it is weird and not really a good weird. But it's your story so it's your call. Also over 150,000 words and I only have one thing I dont care for? Go you, you still rock. Till next time.
Ok, overall I liked this chapter. But there is finally one thing I'm not crazy about. I have to agree with Scott and Allison, Calling Stiles mom is mega weird. I really hope that doesn't show up a lot in the future chapters. It won't stop me from reading but it is weird and not really a good weird. But it's your story so it's your call. Also over 150,000 words and I only have one thing I dont care for? Go you, you still rock. Till next time.
9/10/2015 c23 13XxZessxX
Finally Gerard is dead and the pack and rest for a while without some sort of threat hanging over them. At least for the moment I'm pretty sure you will have more action for them soon.
For a moment I was pretty angry at Scott, good that he did nothing stupid after all. I would not put it past him to do something like that, if he thinks it's the best thing to do.
I just love Coach xD He is awesome. And then when Stiles got to play and even scored a goal xD That was so funny I had to keep myself from laughing out loud since I was on a train and people tend to look strangely at you if you start laughing for no apparent reason
Looking forward to reading more.
XxZessxX
13XxZessxXFinally Gerard is dead and the pack and rest for a while without some sort of threat hanging over them. At least for the moment I'm pretty sure you will have more action for them soon.
For a moment I was pretty angry at Scott, good that he did nothing stupid after all. I would not put it past him to do something like that, if he thinks it's the best thing to do.
I just love Coach xD He is awesome. And then when Stiles got to play and even scored a goal xD That was so funny I had to keep myself from laughing out loud since I was on a train and people tend to look strangely at you if you start laughing for no apparent reason
Looking forward to reading more.
XxZessxX
9/7/2015 c23 Guest
Cora? Isn't she in South America.
Cora? Isn't she in South America.
9/8/2015 c23 4Candy Lof
Loved this chapter! This is story is definitely my favorite STEREK story ever.
4Candy LofLoved this chapter! This is story is definitely my favorite STEREK story ever.
9/7/2015 c23 2Chikacookie
Sorry forgot to review the last chapter was totally good though. Did you name the hunters after the band all time low? I love that band. You're good at reworking the story so that it fits your story but doesn't stray to far from the original. Can't wait to see how you add all the rest of the characters from the show.
2ChikacookieSorry forgot to review the last chapter was totally good though. Did you name the hunters after the band all time low? I love that band. You're good at reworking the story so that it fits your story but doesn't stray to far from the original. Can't wait to see how you add all the rest of the characters from the show.
9/7/2015 c23 90lateVMlover
I hope you don't gloss over Scott's betrayal. THis is the action of Scott from the show. However, your version of him has him not only tied intimately with the pack, but he completely trusts Derek. So what he did here just have some type of fall out.
Is Derek suppose to be back for the 2nd half?
90lateVMloverI hope you don't gloss over Scott's betrayal. THis is the action of Scott from the show. However, your version of him has him not only tied intimately with the pack, but he completely trusts Derek. So what he did here just have some type of fall out.
Is Derek suppose to be back for the 2nd half?
9/7/2015 c23 Nexitye
Loved it! I totally want to know who Tammy is tho (shame cube) and I honestly just want to like, stab Peter in the face. Loving the angsty things! I want so much more... also, any chance the twins won't be douche nozzles or will they still have to progress?
Loved it! I totally want to know who Tammy is tho (shame cube) and I honestly just want to like, stab Peter in the face. Loving the angsty things! I want so much more... also, any chance the twins won't be douche nozzles or will they still have to progress?
9/6/2015 c23 Half Alien
oh, that's an easy one. When Derek gets there he will get to see Cora. By going there she wont come looking and get caught by the alpha pack. Keep up the good work.
oh, that's an easy one. When Derek gets there he will get to see Cora. By going there she wont come looking and get caught by the alpha pack. Keep up the good work.