
8/22/2015 c20
5mycookiesgaara
Thanks for everything this story sure does brighten my day after work. After having to deal with a bitch that is my manager, reading cheers me up. And I love what you did with this chapter and the next. The date was just perfect in the next chapter, and how you brought Heather in early.

Thanks for everything this story sure does brighten my day after work. After having to deal with a bitch that is my manager, reading cheers me up. And I love what you did with this chapter and the next. The date was just perfect in the next chapter, and how you brought Heather in early.
8/16/2015 c20 Coppertod
I just want to say that this is the first fan fiction I have ever read and I created an account specifically to follow it. I absolutely love how it follows the seasons, but it has its own twists and turns. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
I just want to say that this is the first fan fiction I have ever read and I created an account specifically to follow it. I absolutely love how it follows the seasons, but it has its own twists and turns. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
8/14/2015 c20
3mks 12 98
This is such a good chapter! Sorry, I haven't reviewed for the past few chapters, I've been away from for a while.

This is such a good chapter! Sorry, I haven't reviewed for the past few chapters, I've been away from for a while.
8/10/2015 c20 uscgamecockgirl7
Wow. The plot thickens. I'm already trying to figure out who you might make the kanima. Unless it's an oc. Then I really have no clue. Keep going. Love it.
Wow. The plot thickens. I'm already trying to figure out who you might make the kanima. Unless it's an oc. Then I really have no clue. Keep going. Love it.
8/9/2015 c20
2Chikacookie
Love this chapter. I'm curious about who the kanima is if it's not Jackson and I'm glad you made their parents find out bout them, I feel like if they knew sooner in the show things would've been a lot easier for them.

Love this chapter. I'm curious about who the kanima is if it's not Jackson and I'm glad you made their parents find out bout them, I feel like if they knew sooner in the show things would've been a lot easier for them.
8/9/2015 c20
13XxZessxX
Oh, I really like that Danny is part of the pack. He is a nice guy. And I just love Coach Finstock xD He is hilarious! That had to be said.
The ice skating with the whole pack was lovely. I love when they are all happy family. And Derek is right. Stiles is a great pack mum but Derek is also a great Alpha (or pack dad). How about a date for Stiles and Derek? It's been a while since they had alone time. Also I liked that you let Scott and Isaac kiss, I can't remember it happening before but they are mates so it's only natural to kiss each other as well as Allison.
Now with Gearard and the Kanima they really have a few problems. They have to be careful. Hopefully with Deaton's help they will be able to protect themselves. It's good that they can ask Deaton for help and advise now. They will need it.
Happy Birthday, enjoy your party :D
Looking forward to reading more.
XxZessxX

Oh, I really like that Danny is part of the pack. He is a nice guy. And I just love Coach Finstock xD He is hilarious! That had to be said.
The ice skating with the whole pack was lovely. I love when they are all happy family. And Derek is right. Stiles is a great pack mum but Derek is also a great Alpha (or pack dad). How about a date for Stiles and Derek? It's been a while since they had alone time. Also I liked that you let Scott and Isaac kiss, I can't remember it happening before but they are mates so it's only natural to kiss each other as well as Allison.
Now with Gearard and the Kanima they really have a few problems. They have to be careful. Hopefully with Deaton's help they will be able to protect themselves. It's good that they can ask Deaton for help and advise now. They will need it.
Happy Birthday, enjoy your party :D
Looking forward to reading more.
XxZessxX
8/9/2015 c20 Nexitye
So the fact all my little betas are there makes me so happy but like, who's the kanima if not Jacka-boy? The suspense will kill me
So the fact all my little betas are there makes me so happy but like, who's the kanima if not Jacka-boy? The suspense will kill me
8/9/2015 c20
1Ominous07
I really liked this chapter and can't wait for the next one. It's really interesting that the kanima is still around, but isn't Jackson. Is Matt still the master and how did this kanima come to be? I can't wait to see what happens next. By the way, happy birthday.

I really liked this chapter and can't wait for the next one. It's really interesting that the kanima is still around, but isn't Jackson. Is Matt still the master and how did this kanima come to be? I can't wait to see what happens next. By the way, happy birthday.
8/8/2015 c20 Half Alien
I'm so glad that you haven't lost momentum and given up. So many writers will start a story and abandon it. For you have to made ti to over 100,000 words is awsome. This is my current favorite Teen Wolf fanfiction and and I always look forward to a new chapter being posted. I even follow you on AO3. Thank you for taking the time to entertain us with your story.
I'm so glad that you haven't lost momentum and given up. So many writers will start a story and abandon it. For you have to made ti to over 100,000 words is awsome. This is my current favorite Teen Wolf fanfiction and and I always look forward to a new chapter being posted. I even follow you on AO3. Thank you for taking the time to entertain us with your story.
8/8/2015 c20
3Mystic Archer Horse
The pack grew fast! I like that. It was nice read and I look forward to more. I'm just confused as to who the Kanima-Jackson replacement is now.

The pack grew fast! I like that. It was nice read and I look forward to more. I'm just confused as to who the Kanima-Jackson replacement is now.
8/3/2015 c19
6XkabarjohnX
I didn't feel like this chapter was short. it took me a few days to read since I'm so busy, but it was really good! are there going to be more Sterek scenes soon? :D

I didn't feel like this chapter was short. it took me a few days to read since I'm so busy, but it was really good! are there going to be more Sterek scenes soon? :D
8/3/2015 c19
5mycookiesgaara
Omg! Whats going on. Who and what attacked them. Pls answer my questions soon. I loved the chapter and independent Allison. And Stiles female friend outside the pack is is major bitch. Never really liked her. Update quick.

Omg! Whats going on. Who and what attacked them. Pls answer my questions soon. I loved the chapter and independent Allison. And Stiles female friend outside the pack is is major bitch. Never really liked her. Update quick.