3/15/2015 c5 2nalced90
This is a really well written and interesting story.
I enjoyed reading it and I hope you continue on with it, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
This is a really well written and interesting story.
I enjoyed reading it and I hope you continue on with it, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
3/6/2015 c3 Alhena de Eridano
I've been looking for Juuzou's stories everywhere!
I love it so far. And Juuzou is so... Juuzou great job!
Ne ne author-sama... I want another chapter. :)
PD: Pardon my english. Not my first languaje.
I've been looking for Juuzou's stories everywhere!
I love it so far. And Juuzou is so... Juuzou great job!
Ne ne author-sama... I want another chapter. :)
PD: Pardon my english. Not my first languaje.
2/27/2015 c2 ashleygxflora
I liked! I appreciate the idea of inserting Japanese terms in your story, it's nice to learn some basic words:p I also really like how your developing Kazumi's character, it'd be interesting to see how this incident has affected her ideals and personality. In my opinion, I'd wish to see more of Juuzou's thoughts inserted into the story. I kind of want to get a feel of why/how he begins to care or become intrigued by Kazumi, rather than what he's known for; smiley and strange 0.0 Though it depends on how you're make the romance happen. Maybe you'll make Kazumi fall for him first, which sounds more interesting...idk! Lol, Sorry this is so long! I love your story and Juuzou, keep it up! :D
I liked! I appreciate the idea of inserting Japanese terms in your story, it's nice to learn some basic words:p I also really like how your developing Kazumi's character, it'd be interesting to see how this incident has affected her ideals and personality. In my opinion, I'd wish to see more of Juuzou's thoughts inserted into the story. I kind of want to get a feel of why/how he begins to care or become intrigued by Kazumi, rather than what he's known for; smiley and strange 0.0 Though it depends on how you're make the romance happen. Maybe you'll make Kazumi fall for him first, which sounds more interesting...idk! Lol, Sorry this is so long! I love your story and Juuzou, keep it up! :D