for karkat gets egg-nooked2/22/2015 c1 D.H
I find this work of literature greatly enjoyable, and a fine example of its (rather underappriciated in my humble opinion) genre. I especially enjoyed the blatant symbolism in the use of eggs as a sexual item, as well as the incredible wit in Equius's reply to Karkat's final insult. My only criticisms are the length (I had expected something much lengthier), and the minor grammatical errors scattered about here and there. However, I still found this a highly well-written creation, and I do hope you continue to produce fine work like this in the future. Best regards, D.H.
I find this work of literature greatly enjoyable, and a fine example of its (rather underappriciated in my humble opinion) genre. I especially enjoyed the blatant symbolism in the use of eggs as a sexual item, as well as the incredible wit in Equius's reply to Karkat's final insult. My only criticisms are the length (I had expected something much lengthier), and the minor grammatical errors scattered about here and there. However, I still found this a highly well-written creation, and I do hope you continue to produce fine work like this in the future. Best regards, D.H.