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Why won't you finish the story?
Why won't you finish the story?
2/12/2016 c12 Asuka Misora
Awesome chapter. I liked that it included all 4 girls in there helping out.
I thought at first that Rasa killed Tatsuya. But yeah makes sense for it to be Orochimaru.
You did a lot better here with showing the POV changes which made it much easier to read.
Thanks for the update. But like Itachi soon please D:
Awesome chapter. I liked that it included all 4 girls in there helping out.
I thought at first that Rasa killed Tatsuya. But yeah makes sense for it to be Orochimaru.
You did a lot better here with showing the POV changes which made it much easier to read.
Thanks for the update. But like Itachi soon please D:
2/12/2016 c11 Asuka Misora
Sorry for such a late reply, life just gets to you hahah. I think the small issue I had with the Orochimaru-Kabuto scene is that shes so OP (in general). Sometimes I kinda wish for her to be beaten or where she needs to retreat a bit. But I'm also assuming that this will happen once the drama picks up.
I also consider Kabuto to be clever so I find it strange to watch him head into a losing battle.
About this chapter, the transition in POV's was a little confusing. I had to read it about 3-4 times to understand that it was changed to Tatsuya's perspective.
But other than that, thanks for the update!
Sorry for such a late reply, life just gets to you hahah. I think the small issue I had with the Orochimaru-Kabuto scene is that shes so OP (in general). Sometimes I kinda wish for her to be beaten or where she needs to retreat a bit. But I'm also assuming that this will happen once the drama picks up.
I also consider Kabuto to be clever so I find it strange to watch him head into a losing battle.
About this chapter, the transition in POV's was a little confusing. I had to read it about 3-4 times to understand that it was changed to Tatsuya's perspective.
But other than that, thanks for the update!
11/15/2015 c10 Asuka Misora
Sometimes I don't get why you don't get more reviews. This is such a good story. I find it difficult not to tell you that hahah
For some reason, this chapter made me miss Itachi. But when the Chunin exams finally end, I cannot wait for his appearance.
I like that the plot follows alongside the canon but doesn't completely follow it. Makes it easier to know the timeline.
I find the scene of Kabuto and Orochimaru's meeting slightly odd. Just because it seems so convenient that she's watching even though I know she's following them. I don't know. It's probably just me.
Other than that, congrats on achieving one of your dreams ((: and thanks for the update!
Sometimes I don't get why you don't get more reviews. This is such a good story. I find it difficult not to tell you that hahah
For some reason, this chapter made me miss Itachi. But when the Chunin exams finally end, I cannot wait for his appearance.
I like that the plot follows alongside the canon but doesn't completely follow it. Makes it easier to know the timeline.
I find the scene of Kabuto and Orochimaru's meeting slightly odd. Just because it seems so convenient that she's watching even though I know she's following them. I don't know. It's probably just me.
Other than that, congrats on achieving one of your dreams ((: and thanks for the update!
10/30/2015 c9 Asuka Misora
Amazing story so far. I can't wait to read more!
I would like to see more flashbacks of her relationship with Itachi. Or even small child moments with Kakashi, Naruto and Sasuke/Itachi. Though I do get that she's pushing her memories away.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Amazing story so far. I can't wait to read more!
I would like to see more flashbacks of her relationship with Itachi. Or even small child moments with Kakashi, Naruto and Sasuke/Itachi. Though I do get that she's pushing her memories away.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
6/12/2015 c7 Guest
love your background and attention to detail. I usually hate stories that don't jump right into the romance but I couldn't stop reading yours until the end. It was beautiful and delightful to read.
love your background and attention to detail. I usually hate stories that don't jump right into the romance but I couldn't stop reading yours until the end. It was beautiful and delightful to read.
6/14/2015 c7 
9gowolf
I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews, this is great, one of my favorite Naruto fanfics.
9gowolfI'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews, this is great, one of my favorite Naruto fanfics.
4/14/2015 c6 2Fighting.Change
Been a long time since I read any naruto fanfic, this ones a good one to get me back into them! Can't wait for more!
2Fighting.ChangeBeen a long time since I read any naruto fanfic, this ones a good one to get me back into them! Can't wait for more!
4/14/2015 c6 13twistedlittledoll
Yyyyyyaaaaaay Gaa-chan! :D
I hope to see some more Gaara in the future c;
13twistedlittledollYyyyyyaaaaaay Gaa-chan! :D
I hope to see some more Gaara in the future c;
4/6/2015 c5 twistedlittledoll
This is way to good of a story to have one review. It deserves more recognition.
Otherwise, I like the chapter. I love Gaara as well :)
This is way to good of a story to have one review. It deserves more recognition.
Otherwise, I like the chapter. I love Gaara as well :)
2/22/2015 c1 twistedlittledoll
I live it ;)
The longer, the more to read and that's good:)
Hope to read more
I live it ;)
The longer, the more to read and that's good:)
Hope to read more